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Sep 14, 2013 at 01:36 PM
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p.1 #2 · Moments


Nobody has any comments?


Sep 15, 2013 at 07:30 AM
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Hey mate, saw these earlier today bit was on the mobile so couldn't comment.

A couple of ones in there I really like especially 1. Did you just stand there waiting for someone to look at the ad? cool capture.

2 and 3 are cool but 4 really made me laugh.

I think 6 is the one I like the most, the more I look at it the more I see. originally I was drawn to the man and his shadow, but then his reflection caught my eye and that really completes the image.

Regards
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Sep 15, 2013 at 07:39 AM
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Thanks so much Bud for commenting. To # 1, yes I was waiting for something to happen and this kid was walking by and he originally past the ad but I think curiosity got the best of him and he turned back to see what i was shooting. Also the sign was changing between this and another ad every 10 seconds or so. And just as he started to look to see what i wwas shooting he was blowing a bubble (bubble I would guess)

And #6 was pure luck. The skateboarder shot past me and into this shaft of light and just as I ouched the shutter I saw his reflection in the window.



Sep 15, 2013 at 07:47 AM
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p.1 #5 · Moments


These are all great to me. I like that sparce, alone feeling they give me. Good stuff.


Sep 15, 2013 at 07:57 AM
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p.1 #6 · Moments


Thanks JmsWms

Allen



Sep 15, 2013 at 08:04 AM
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p.1 #7 · Moments


#4 with the sign behind the dog is wonderful. Not sure if that is a male or female dog, but the sign really made me chuckle at how it relates to the dog's stubbornness. #1 and #6 are awesome.


Sep 15, 2013 at 10:02 AM
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p.1 #8 · Moments


The first and the skateboarder are really good.


Sep 15, 2013 at 10:34 AM
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p.1 #9 · Moments


Thank you. Street work (hate that term) seems to not get a lot of respect over here outside the Leica/alt thread And I don't know why. Heres a great trailer from an upcoming film called Everybody Street and Meyerowitz articulates the allure for many and for me.
http://www.traileraddict.com/trailer/everybody-street/trailer



Sep 15, 2013 at 10:37 AM
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The one with the dog made me laugh. Some beautiful work. The last one is fantastic as well.


Sep 15, 2013 at 11:01 AM
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p.1 #11 · Moments


Thanks Sunny


Sep 15, 2013 at 11:40 AM
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I don't know, I think it's unfair to see that street photography does not get a lot of respect here in the People forum. I checked out that trailer, and pretty much every picture shown in there was really interesting to me. The subjects, the people, were the story.

I don't really see that in your street photography. It's like your street photography is a hybrid between people and urban landscapes, and the pictures you posted here are a really good example of that for me.

Of your pictures, No. 1 appeals to me because there's some kind of emotional reaction going on with the kid looking at the advertisement. But for the others, I don't see the stories in them that I saw with the pics from the trailer

Old man and woman kissing in a bar in a pretty tight closeup. Interesting! Are they married, or just hooking up, or what? No matter what, it sounds interesting. The couple in the back of the car, laying together. Immediately, I want to know if they're living in the car, and if so, why, and what their story is. Lady with the bandage, what happened?

Your pictures are interesting, too, but in a different way, and a way that may not generate as much interest in a People forum. I think the focus of your shots are the urban landscape, and you use light, shadows, leading lines, to drive home your subject, the urban landscape. People, to me, just happen to be in your pictures.

The woman walking by the table and three chairs. I don't have any connection with her to wonder where she's going, what she's doing. Guy in work boots and work pants carrying a board or whatever. I can't even see him, so I have no connection and I'm not interested in him personally. Woman with bulldog, the dog's resolute nature to stand there makes for an interesting picture. But if this was shot from the other direction so we could see the woman's reaction to her bulldog stopping, the human interest level in the pic would really take off, I think. Guy on the phone texting or whatever, no connection. Skateboarder in harsh direct light. I didn't even realize he was on a skateboard til I saw you mention that. Guys smoking and looking at you. Guys walking down steps, person's legs crossed.

Now, I'm not saying these pics are bad. I think the artistic elements of these shots are very interesting, but more from a urban landscape perspective. Hope you don't feel like I'm dissing you as that's not my intention. I just saw your comment about street photography not getting respected, and thought I'd offer my thoughts on it.



Sep 15, 2013 at 01:14 PM
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I do think that for the most part here (except the thread I mentioned earleir) people seem to gravitate towards what Weston called the obvious. That's not a good or a bad thing, it's just a thing.

The images that I think are more about what my work is about are the images like the woman and the table and the strong graphic. I really don't care what she's doing or where she is going other than the fact is she forms another strong visual element to my image. My work is images like the kid and the poster and the guy on the skateboard with his reflection in the background.

They are about moments when those visual elements all come together for a split second Many aren't going to like my work and I'm very cool with that. In fact I prefer it that way. And I do like to get feed back, good and bad so thanks for your detailed remarks. I say lets keep the conversation going.

I forgot to add this question; can a good photograph be about line, shape, movement, tone, geometry or other visual elements? I say it can.

Try'n to watch the Bears game and type is deadly (LoL).

The photo of the line and the shoes is about tone contrast and shape.

The image of the guy carrying the bar is about line. The guy is secondary. It's not about him as much as it is about the line and the action he is performing. Then question is do we need to see all of him to fill it in visually? Does it all need to be spelled out?




Sep 15, 2013 at 01:52 PM
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From one street photography enthusiast to another here is my unfilterized feedback.

#1 - Nice try. Not enough as a stand alone image for me.
#2 - I know what you were going for here, but I don't think the geometery and patterns are strong enough here. There are sort of all over the board.
#3 - Toss
#4 - I just see a stubborn dog being pulled by it's owner.
#5 - Toss. These types of shots are difficult to provide interest.
#6 - My favorite. The contrast, especially the darks could be slighlty too dar though at least on my work monitor. Overall maybe a keeper. Depends how you use this image in a larger body of work.
#7 - Not enough.
#8 - Similiar to #2.
#9 - I know what you're going for, but toss.


Anyway like I always mentioned I do enjoy your work. I just believe in honest unfiltered feedback. I haven't shot any street photography in such a long time and when I do get the small window of opportunity it's always on the go with the wife, which makes it difficult I'll be going home to Hawaii for a visit with just my S110 P&S. Maybe I sneak away a few times and see if I can get anything.



Sep 15, 2013 at 02:06 PM
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I like honest feedback to. And again I hope everyone doesn't like my personal work, seriously. So thanks for your feedback. My images are never meant to be stand alone. My work is about the body. Only a few of these will make the cut if any.

Also you guys are mild compared to the art directors and other creative professionals I have to deal with during the week (LoL). We usually discuss specifics instead of it just misses and when $$$ is involved it can get very interesting



Sep 15, 2013 at 02:18 PM
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airfrogusmc wrote:
My images... are about moments when those visual elements all come together for a split second Many aren't going to like my work and I'm very cool with that. In fact I prefer it that way. And I do like to get feed back, good and bad so thanks for your detailed remarks. I say lets keep the conversation going.

I forgot to add this question; can a good photograph be about line, shape, movement, tone, geometry or other visual elements? I say it can.


Completely agree. And I think we're both on the same page on your street photography.


The photo of the line and the shoes is about tone contrast and shape.

The image of the guy carrying the bar is about line. The guy is secondary. It's not about him as much as it is about the line and the action he is performing. Then question is do we need to see all of him to fill it in visually? Does it all need to be spelled out?


No, I think you have your style and you stick to it. It will continue to evolve as you continue to shoot and think about your work. But what you've described about your street photography is exactly in line with my understanding of your work. And there's definitely a place for this type of street photography. Having said that, it doesn't really matter what I or anyone else thinks, other than yourself. If no one blazed new trails, went against the grain, photography would get pretty boring.



Sep 15, 2013 at 04:43 PM
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Ok boingyman Bears now game is over (Bears are now 2 & 0 YEAH) and my rebuttal.

#1 is about hte moment and in my opinion it is caught. Will probably make the cut.

#2 is the strongest of the set in my opinion. The reason I shot it and like it so much is the string line bring the eye in from the left into the image. The gentle curve on the bottom of the stairs repeats that curve of the table. The geometric pattern of the squares is broken by the curves and circle of the table. I also think the strong movement of the woman at a right angle diagonal to the railing creates a tension that really gets to the heart of this image. I need some more time with it to see if it makes that grade over time.

#3 I will toss. To much like the famous Ralph Gibson image where the white stick is parallel wit hte lines on the pavement. This fails in that regard plus again done much better by Gibson.

#4 On the fence but there is humor which is in a lot of my work.

#5 love the commentary it makes about the time and place. Everyone is on a devise now and I like the way he stepped into the light, the strng diagonal light pattern and the depth with the light area in hte background but this to will probably be tossed.

#6 will probably make the cut for reasons already stated.

#7 will be tossed.

#8 tossed

#9 definitely in for now. The strong diagonal white line seems to be creating a strong barrier for the white shoes. It's a simple, clean composition and the repeating shapes in the bottom right are larger and running in different direction to the pattern under the shoes. I find all of those contrasts interesting.

Thats my 2 cents. Thanks for your comments because they do help especially on images that are on the bubble. The images I really feel strongly about maybe not s much (LoL)....

Might have another show next year so this imput is all good.

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Sep 15, 2013 at 04:47 PM
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friscoron wrote:
Completely agree. And I think we're both on the same page on your street photography.

No, I think you have your style and you stick to it. It will continue to evolve as you continue to shoot and think about your work. But what you've described about your street photography is exactly in line with my understanding of your work. And there's definitely a place for this type of street photography. Having said that, it doesn't really matter what I or anyone else thinks, other than yourself. If no one blazed new trails, went against the grain, photography would get pretty
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Thanks for your comments and my style is a work in progress and I agree, if you are doing things that some don't see then you are probably doing something right. The safe and easy thing to do is to make images that everybody loves but safe, when it comes to creativity, in my opinion, is not a good place to be.

I also wanted to add this. I think sometimes things that are outside the frame are also important. Maybe even more important to the image. I don't think we meed to be told everything. In fact I would say the more interesting images are the ones that don't tell you everything and keep you coming back to find more.

Heres an interesting piece that touches on this subject by Meyerowitz.



Also I would much rather make crappy images that look like mine than beautiful photographs that look like everyone else's. I know not everyone feels this way and thats OK but his is the way I feel. If everyone liked my work then that means everyone is understanding what I am doing. Heres a great quote by Martha Graham and I am in no way saying that I'm an artist (LoL) because that label really doesn't matter to me.

"No artist is ahead of his time. He is the time. It is just that others are behind the time.”-Martha Graham








Sep 15, 2013 at 04:51 PM
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These are rather poorly composed ... nice try at being artistic but it was a monumental fail ... as my daughter said when she saw these:

"That was strange, what was the point of these?"



Sep 15, 2013 at 06:06 PM
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Thats a little vague. Which ones do you feel are composed badly and why?


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