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KyleR.
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Kyle

Mar 13, 2010 at 10:16 PM

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I like the conversion, some might quibble about the blown out areas, especially the top most sound port(?).

I am not comfortable with the composition and cannot identify why, other than the top most portion, to me, is disconnected with the remainder of the image..perhaps it is the upward sweep that leads the eye away. Too, the horizontal rib is at odds with the arc traced by the ports.

Did you shoot more from different perspectives?

my 2 cents,

Bob

Mar 14, 2010 at 01:48 AM

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Thanks Bob,

I didn't get any other angles, as it is very hard to get my camera in the piano!
Thanks for your opinion!

Kyle

Mar 14, 2010 at 02:00 AM

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p.1 #4 · Soundboard

Nice conversion but I agree with Bob about the hot spots. I can imagine it was difficult to get the shot but it would be nice to see a little more.

Jeff

Mar 14, 2010 at 02:20 AM

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To me, the problem with the compo is that the eye tends to swing up and down, following the arc of the lipped holes. There's not an image element strong or unique enough to anchor the eye.

Mar 14, 2010 at 02:37 AM

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p.1 #6 · Soundboard

I think I see what you mean Auntipode.

Mar 14, 2010 at 02:57 AM

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