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Tyson Egbert
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p.1 #1 · Brett and Heather

This is one of my first sessions I have posted on this forum. Been lurking here for a while. Learned a lot from all of you. I am sure you might see some shots that can be credited to those that frequent the forum. I want to thank you all for your inspiration. I would love some serious feedback on anything you can think of, even if it is just your favorites or the ones you hate. Anything will help.

I went out with Brett and Heather last Saturday to shoot their engagement session. We started in downtown SLC at 8am. It was really cold! My fingers went completely numb.

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Feb 07, 2010 at 03:52 PM

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p.1 #2 · Brett and Heather

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Feb 07, 2010 at 03:55 PM

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Feb 07, 2010 at 03:59 PM

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p.1 #4 · Brett and Heather

Sorry, fixed now.

Feb 07, 2010 at 04:06 PM

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p.1 #5 · Brett and Heather

First thing .... hard to specific photo review ... need numbers on each pic.

Good stuff. Nice images overall.
The later ones look like you where battling the harsh sun which creates the squintie eyes.

I also find the background on later ones competing for attention. Not bad but just take note.

Middle one with olive green background would be cool in B&W or a washed out pp.

Really like the images after the picking thru the mesh pictures.

Later,
_Mark

Feb 07, 2010 at 04:19 PM

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p.1 #6 · Brett and Heather

I think it's a good set.

The second to last one has an odd look. He kind of looks like a bobble head to me (sorry).

They are a great looking couple and you did a good job so far....

Feb 07, 2010 at 04:42 PM

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p.1 #7 · Brett and Heather

Hey Tyson, they look really good. The last ones look a bit bright but I love 2 & 3. The light is so nice in those ones

Feb 07, 2010 at 05:19 PM

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p.1 #8 · Brett and Heather

Thanks for the feedback so far. I have added numbers to make it easier.

Feb 07, 2010 at 06:05 PM

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p.1 #9 · Brett and Heather

I really like the one of them kissing through the red fencing...

Feb 07, 2010 at 06:05 PM

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p.1 #10 · Brett and Heather

I don't like any of them until 11, and I don't like 22 through 24. I like all the ones in the middle.

Feb 07, 2010 at 06:14 PM

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p.1 #11 · Brett and Heather

Thanks Ardent!

VPell, Any feedback as to what you don't like about the others? I wan't to work on getting better. Hard to do that without knowing what I need to work on.

Thanks

Feb 07, 2010 at 06:20 PM

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p.1 #12 · Brett and Heather

I love 17 and 18 as a series. I don't know if it was intentional or not (hoping that it was) but conceptually it's brilliant. I also like 15 and 20. (Did these get renumbered or something or am I going mad? I edited my numbers after looking back at this post.) Cheers, Martin

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Feb 08, 2010 at 02:01 PM

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p.1 #13 · Brett and Heather

Nice Expressions on most, I'm sure the couple were very happy with them. The wide angle distortion on 8,9,10 is a little distracting looking (being able to see both sides of the face at the same time)
Can't tell why, but 19 looks a tad unnatural, specifically his legs.

Feb 08, 2010 at 04:54 PM

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p.1 #14 · Brett and Heather

I like 18 and 19. Not crazy about 9 and 10 - passport photos. Overall not bad.

Feb 08, 2010 at 05:00 PM

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p.1 #15 · Brett and Heather

Thanks for the feedback! There is definitely some wide angle distortion. I shot the whole session with the 35L. I have lots of other glass but find it hard to shoot with anything else. Not much else compares. It is by far my favorite. Eventually I will get an 85L and a TS-e. I think the TS-e will come first though.

Feb 09, 2010 at 03:38 AM

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p.1 #16 · Brett and Heather

She is very photogenic

Feb 09, 2010 at 04:56 AM

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p.1 #17 · Brett and Heather

I like #12 alot...

Feb 09, 2010 at 05:09 AM

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p.1 #18 · Brett and Heather

Well, I think you've given these two a lot of wonderful pictures. I know you say you've learned from others on FM but I think you have a style all your own. I never felt like I was looking at the same-old, same-old. If I had to pick the weak links, 7 - 11 didnt' do much for me. Almost seemed out of place. But the rest have a great quality and show your eye...and nice processing too! Great work all around and work you and the clients can be proud to show.

Scott

Feb 09, 2010 at 06:41 AM

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p.1 #19 · Brett and Heather

Nice stuffs! I was liking them and then when I hit #12 I felt like it really ramped up and blew it away. I bet your clients were psyched!

Feb 09, 2010 at 03:54 PM

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p.1 #20 · Brett and Heather

Thanks a lot, all of you! I really appreciate the honest feedback.

Feb 10, 2010 at 03:22 AM

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