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Ole Martin
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p.1 #1 · Rough glam

A glam shot I did yesterday =)

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Hope you like it, c&c appriciated.

You can view a bw version and a warmer one at my blog http://blogg.cruelphotography.com =)

Oct 31, 2009 at 11:02 PM

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p.1 #2 · Rough glam

Love the way the light hits her face and body.

Solid

Oct 31, 2009 at 11:04 PM

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p.1 #3 · Rough glam

I like it. I think you could post it a bit bigger so my weak eyes....

I don't understand the black area in the triangle of her right arm. My sense is this should be lit like the background just outside of her arm. Or is she that close to the wall and the light is blocked by her arm? Anyway, its a bit small so I couldn't tell. The black hair is against a black wall area too, and it might have been better with the lit wall behind that feature.
I like the lighting and the face being brighter that the other areas.

Nov 01, 2009 at 01:03 AM

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p.1 #4 · Rough glam

Thanks for the comments..

The black area is a shadow created by her, yes. She is leaning back on the wall, so she is very close to it ;=)

Ill post it bigger when I create the gallery for the model to see, this is just from my blog :P

Nov 01, 2009 at 01:14 PM

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p.1 #5 · Rough glam

nice lighting and shot.

Nov 05, 2009 at 04:39 PM

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p.1 #6 · Rough glam

agree, i love the colors on this image.

Nov 05, 2009 at 08:22 PM

Ole Martin
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p.1 #7 · Rough glam

thanks =) glad you liked the shots of her.. Ill post up a few more when Im finished editing, later tonight =)

Nov 05, 2009 at 09:46 PM

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p.1 #8 · Rough glam

I like it. I would like to see it pulled in a little. I don't find her thighs in jeans that interesting. Nice job.

Nov 05, 2009 at 10:30 PM

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p.1 #9 · Rough glam

What was your lighting setup like? I really love your lighting technique.

Nov 06, 2009 at 12:42 AM

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p.1 #10 · Rough glam

Hmm, don't really like the pose here.

Nov 06, 2009 at 01:46 AM

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p.1 #11 · Rough glam

Agree with Justin. Something about "Up Against The Wall" and the tats on her wrists makes it look like ... hope she isn't Jewish.

I really hope that crap on her arms isn't real.

Nov 06, 2009 at 03:37 AM

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p.1 #12 · Rough glam

the type of pose isn't bad, but little tweaks would have made the image much stronger. i really like the lighting.

1. IMO, if the legs would have be crossed, it would given her a more shapely hip/figure instead of a straight on tom boy look.

2. also lower one shoulder slight would have added a nicer angle to the upper body.

3. if the hands were slight closer together would have connect the pose together..

the way she is set up is too "square".

Nov 06, 2009 at 01:15 PM

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p.1 #13 · Rough glam

@fstop212, thanks =)

@saadsyed, just one medium sized softbox up aimed almost at me, so just the sidelight is hitting her =)

@pandacat i dont really get it? you dont hope her chinese tattoo with her childrens name on is real ?

@tony, thanks for the good comment.

I agree on 1. and 2. but not really one nr 3 =) I normally do more lean and hips on these type of poses, but I think this one makes her look very lean, even if it doesnt emphasize her feminine curves as much as it perhaps should =)

Nov 06, 2009 at 10:10 PM

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