I like it. I think you could post it a bit bigger so my weak eyes....
I don't understand the black area in the triangle of her right arm. My sense is this should be lit like the background just outside of her arm. Or is she that close to the wall and the light is blocked by her arm? Anyway, its a bit small so I couldn't tell. The black hair is against a black wall area too, and it might have been better with the lit wall behind that feature.
I like the lighting and the face being brighter that the other areas.
@saadsyed, just one medium sized softbox up aimed almost at me, so just the sidelight is hitting her =)
@pandacat i dont really get it? you dont hope her chinese tattoo with her childrens name on is real ?
@tony, thanks for the good comment.
I agree on 1. and 2. but not really one nr 3 =) I normally do more lean and hips on these type of poses, but I think this one makes her look very lean, even if it doesnt emphasize her feminine curves as much as it perhaps should =)