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p.1 #10 · Ramie and Pablo (12-6-08) | |
few thoughts-some nice shots in there but i would suggest really getting in the mix-looks like you're standing a ways off from them and there's no connection to the moment/action-you could either use a slightly longer focal length or if you're shooting wider, get in closer-either way, fill the frame a bit more
for silhouettes, such as #36, think about where the light is-you placed their faces in front of the door frame, thus blocking the backlighting you were trying to utilize-moving them two feet either way would solve that
29 is a very nice capture-like it-i also like shots like #22-shows you're looking for action
hope this is useful
daniel
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