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p.1 #1 · Ramie and Pablo (12-6-08)


They were a great couple and we had a blast shooting the wedding.

1 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3196/3114134125_dc44342cba.jpg

2 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3052/3114964178_6b06122a89.jpg

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4 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3103/3114134821_d03d57e242.jpg

5 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3163/3114964812_e4db53bdeb.jpg

6 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3023/3114964990_6c582af62f.jpg

7 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3003/3114965214_9ab750bce1.jpg

8 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3166/3114135551_f6cf57b15f.jpg

9 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3094/3114135763_5988594bc1.jpg

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14 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3086/3114136787_6ba211a58f.jpg

15 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3210/3114966704_2e829a18b3.jpg

16 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3052/3114966982_17936c1fc2.jpg

17 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3211/3114967260_72e08497d5.jpg

18 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3056/3114137647_265f9745f8.jpg

19 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3236/3114137923_bf27f71064.jpg

20 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3097/3114138047_f0d8aebe26.jpg

21 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3091/3114138163_cf170c303a.jpg

22 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3197/3114138323_a24a6e31ed.jpg

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24 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3034/3114968400_21776de350.jpg

25 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3160/3114138905_7622f28673.jpg

26 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3144/3114969282_fac8e41a3b.jpg
(iso3200 FTW!)

27 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3093/3114969810_caeb89f8e5.jpg

28 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3211/3114969962_5c5ccd8dac.jpg

29 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3034/3114970188_7b409130ac.jpg

30 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3114/3114140739_42c0a7e0d4.jpg

31 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3019/3114141007_f58cf2d286.jpg

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33 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3066/3114141701_a962520cac.jpg

34 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3286/3114971880_f5ab0e3006.jpg

35 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3043/3114142459_330ae74449.jpg

36 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3151/3114972480_e2f32e1748.jpg

37 -http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3032/3114143175_ebd7f9c3f5.jpg

C&C would be appreciated!

Edited on Dec 17, 2008 at 09:08 AM · View previous versions



Dec 16, 2008 at 09:49 PM
scott shoemake
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p.1 #2 · Ramie and Pablo (12-6-08)


Just a little hint to get you some more comments. If you're looking for comments and critique, put a little note and ask the community to help you out. I, personally, don't like to critique other people's images until they've asked. Good luck.


Dec 17, 2008 at 02:58 AM
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p.1 #3 · Ramie and Pablo (12-6-08)


One more thing... Put numbers on the pictures (next to under or over), this way they can say, (I like #5 or I dislike #5).




Dec 17, 2008 at 08:04 AM
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p.1 #4 · Ramie and Pablo (12-6-08)


Looks like you did a great job of lighting the reception!

Some critiques for you:
1. A little too much vignette in some of these for me (although it's more noticeable since they're small photos)
2. A few too many of them are shot from your eye-level. I would challenge you to get lower or higher to give the images more interesting perspective.



Dec 17, 2008 at 08:09 AM
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p.1 #5 · Ramie and Pablo (12-6-08)


Secondlaw wrote:
One more thing... Put numbers on the pictures (next to under or over), this way they can say, (I like #5 or I dislike #5).



scott shoemake wrote:
Just a little hint to get you some more comments. If you're looking for comments and critique, put a little note and ask the community to help you out. I, personally, don't like to critique other people's images until they've asked. Good luck.


Done and Done.

Sorry about that.



Dec 17, 2008 at 09:09 AM
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p.1 #6 · Ramie and Pablo (12-6-08)


Tony Hoffer wrote:
Looks like you did a great job of lighting the reception!

Some critiques for you:
1. A little too much vignette in some of these for me (although it's more noticeable since they're small photos)
2. A few too many of them are shot from your eye-level. I would challenge you to get lower or higher to give the images more interesting perspective.


Thanks Tony, I'll def. try that out at my future weddings.

I appreciate your comments.



Dec 17, 2008 at 09:09 AM
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p.1 #7 · Ramie and Pablo (12-6-08)


Were you 2nd shooting? A lot of the portraits are of peoples backs or of them not looking at the camera. I like the detail shots.


Dec 17, 2008 at 10:49 AM
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p.1 #8 · Ramie and Pablo (12-6-08)


Andrew Welsh wrote:
Were you 2nd shooting? A lot of the portraits are of peoples backs or of them not looking at the camera. I like the detail shots.


No, these were just my favorites of the day. There's a lot more that I didn't post that are your more 'traditional' photos.



Dec 17, 2008 at 11:15 AM
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p.1 #9 · Ramie and Pablo (12-6-08)


Andrew Welsh wrote:
Were you 2nd shooting? A lot of the portraits are of peoples backs or of them not looking at the camera. I like the detail shots.


I was a second shooter. It was great and fun as seeing it was my 1st time actually shooting a wedding. I've always been the sort of drunk having fun. lol

WOOT! Some of my pictures were used. Keep it up Jorge.



Dec 18, 2008 at 01:59 AM
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p.1 #10 · Ramie and Pablo (12-6-08)


few thoughts-some nice shots in there but i would suggest really getting in the mix-looks like you're standing a ways off from them and there's no connection to the moment/action-you could either use a slightly longer focal length or if you're shooting wider, get in closer-either way, fill the frame a bit more

for silhouettes, such as #36, think about where the light is-you placed their faces in front of the door frame, thus blocking the backlighting you were trying to utilize-moving them two feet either way would solve that

29 is a very nice capture-like it-i also like shots like #22-shows you're looking for action

hope this is useful

daniel



Dec 18, 2008 at 02:32 AM





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