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p.1 #1 · Broken Glass/updated pic

Extra sharpening added to highlight the shattered effect.
Please let me know what you think of this!
Thanks -
Tim

First one was pretty small with a cheesey frame. Does this work better, or maybe best to hit the old delete key on this shot?

Edited on Dec 08, 2008 at 06:50 PM · View previous versions

Dec 08, 2008 at 03:27 AM

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p.1 #2 · Broken Glass/updated pic

Interesting concept Tim, however the image is much to small for me to see any detail. Perhaps a larger image?

eric

Dec 08, 2008 at 04:59 AM

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p.1 #3 · Broken Glass/updated pic

Kind of elusive subject on this image for me Tim. I do like the two roads, and a turning area effect, but the glass or whatever it is could be tweaked to add to the locale a bit.

Dec 08, 2008 at 06:07 AM

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p.1 #4 · Broken Glass/updated pic

Thanks, guys. Yeah, I think Eric's suggestion of a larger post would help with your issues on this too, Tim. It's actually a frozen puddle that has been smashed. Looks a lot better in larger format.

Dec 08, 2008 at 06:41 AM

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p.1 #5 · Broken Glass/updated pic

T-bone1 wrote:
Thanks, guys. Yeah, I think Eric's suggestion of a larger post would help with your issues on this too, Tim. It's actually a frozen puddle that has been smashed. Looks a lot better in larger format.

Ohhhhh it was a smashed puddle? I seriously thought that someone had put a bunch of glass in the middle of the forest, silly me

. But let's see that bigger version Tim!

eric

Dec 08, 2008 at 07:28 AM

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p.1 #6 · Broken Glass/updated pic

Bump for revised picture...

Dec 08, 2008 at 06:51 PM

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p.1 #7 · Broken Glass/updated pic

Sorry Tim, as one of your "cyber-buddies" on FM, I would have to say you have to put this one in storage. The idea of the shot was excellent, but the execution didn't seem to go as planned. I would have preferred a shot in which I could see the individual jaggiez of the broken pond that looked like glass. However in this far-away shot I can't see much, and without the title I would be very lost in what was going on in this image.

sincerely,
eric

Dec 08, 2008 at 09:55 PM

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p.1 #8 · Broken Glass/updated pic

Thanks for the second look, Eric. Hey, I gave it the old college try though!

Dec 08, 2008 at 11:57 PM

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p.1 #9 · Broken Glass/updated pic

More better Tim. Now I get it!

Dec 09, 2008 at 06:30 AM

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p.1 #10 · Broken Glass/updated pic

Hi

yeah, seems like there are some good shots in there somewhere - closer to the shattered "glass"

Did you take any others?

Alan

Dec 09, 2008 at 11:16 AM

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p.1 #11 · Broken Glass/updated pic

Looks neat! I see some pines to the right, what part of the U.S. are you in?

Morg

Dec 09, 2008 at 02:03 PM

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p.1 #12 · Broken Glass/updated pic

Thank you Tim, Alan, and Morg. It looked so cool in person, but I just couldn't get it to translate onto the camera! I think I'll go back and try some new approaches, including getting closer.
You're right, Morgan, those are pines. This is in Riverside State Park in Spokane, Washington. Pines galore!

Dec 10, 2008 at 02:04 AM

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p.1 #13 · Broken Glass/updated pic

not saying much to me

Dec 10, 2008 at 09:13 PM

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