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itchhhh Offline • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #1 · Your thoughts? CC welcomed. "Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life". ~Oscar Wilde by itchhhh, on Flickr "Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life". ~Oscar Wilde Not my standard fare in photography but the scene left an indelable impression that I had to click the shutter. Oscars quote just seems to fit too The artists name is Smadar Arzy Livne. Feb 12, 2013 at 04:25 PM

RustyBug Offline • • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #2 · Your thoughts? CC welcomed. Diggin' it ... on a few levels. The obvious play on the artist's legs extending from the woman's dress is well composed for the flow of the lines. Also, there is the "artist hiding behind/surrounded by/immersed in her art" ... something that can strike a chord with artists on different levels. A bit mundane looking ... until you start thinking about it. That's the part that I dig, the message(s) to be found. I could see some tweaking to help a bit with the business/distractions ... but that's only nits to further strengthen it. Feb 12, 2013 at 05:37 PM

eeneryma Offline • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #3 · Your thoughts? CC welcomed. Wondered what you thought about doing this in black and white. The colors and saturation of the artwork are so strong, in a way I think it distracts from the message. Just a quick conversion that can probably be done better by others. Another take...Black and White Feb 12, 2013 at 06:24 PM

AuntiPode Offline • • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #4 · Your thoughts? CC welcomed. Love the image game. You might consider a slightly tighter crop and some exposure/gamma selections to focus the viewer's gaze a bit: Feb 12, 2013 at 08:41 PM

cgardner Offline • • • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #5 · Your thoughts? CC welcomed. Like it for the novelty and mystery of trying to guess what the lady behind the painting looks like. The real message I see here is in the painting and the feet. Everything else pulls me off that message and dilutes it: The red painting and the clutter above, those in the gap. I also don't really see the connection with the caption either and it becomes a distraction also. The drop shadow is dropped and blurred so much it looks like a smudge and is also distracting. This one is a case where I think isolating the dancer painting and the legs in color and making everything else B&W and blurring it a bit would work and the art <> life duality clearer without all the other distractions. If you try that I'd lose the drop shadow on the caption. Edited on Feb 13, 2013 at 10:30 PM · View previous versions Feb 13, 2013 at 12:23 AM

Bob Jarman Offline • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #6 · Your thoughts? CC welcomed. I like it. Fun Image. Bob Feb 13, 2013 at 12:44 AM

itchhhh Offline • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #7 · Your thoughts? CC welcomed. Thanks for all of the valuable feedback!!! Feb 15, 2013 at 01:55 AM

sbeme Offline • • • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #8 · Your thoughts? CC welcomed. Fun, amusing, good eye. I can imagine this on a wall getting smiles with many, many viewings. I much prefer the color. I like Karen's tighter crop. Scott Feb 15, 2013 at 12:08 PM

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