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What you have here is the perfect situation for creating a "ping-pong" composition where two objects of equal attraction oppose each other with a less interesting gap in the middle forcing the viewer's eye to jump between them like following the ball watching a ping-pong or tennis match. That works better with only one phone booth...
http://super.nova.org/EDITS/Airport.jpg
While the windows are tinted and the camera captured that accurately, eyes in person would adapt to the tint and not see it, so I normalized the color with the eye dropper tool.
I also agree this is a good candidate for a B&W conversion because the color content don't add anything and tends to distract...
http://super.nova.org/EDITS/AirportBW.jpg
The choice of the darker gray mat is to make the tone of the foreground figures contrast more. I made it wider on the sides to add back, symmetrically, the negative space lost in making the square crop.
As for C&C on the capture of them image, had you lowered the POV of the camera a bit more you would have been able to eliminate the tops of the cars seen outside in the foreground for a cleaner, less distracting background. Also shallower DOF to slightly blur the background would have more effectively isolated the foreground.
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