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| p.2 #17 · team photo - FINALIZED POSTER |
The shots are looking great and done well technically. As I was looking through them all, a common issue with them kept popping in my head that I was hoping to see get resolved by a final version later in the thread, but it hadn't happened. Then I read that Paul picked up on the problem as I did, and Guy was the one who arrived at the same remedy that I had in mind.
Just keeping it real here, so don't take offense-- only my opinion, but as they are, the shots look cool but aren't working for me with the background. And it's simply because they don't have anything visually or otherwise to tie them together so they make sense. On the visual level, they are totally incongruous. Nothing wrong with that, but it still helps the overall impact immensely when a poster makes sense. To me, adding a slogan would completely change the feel of this piece and bring it all together, whether it's "TOP OF THE HEAP" as Guy mentioned, or something like "DISMANTLING THE OPPOSITION". Another idea would be to reference them as a scrappy team... you get the picture.
I know it's quite a load of work to produce those shots and you did a great job. Taking that last little step would finish it up...