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gneto
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Re: Lil Sis.....


My $0.02...

I think you overdid the darkening close to the bordes of the frame. Her eyes are such powerful magnets, you don't need much to draw attention to them. Your original image makes me feel "imprisoned" or "trapped" in the very center of the image, and it's already a tight crop, made it feel even tighter. Also, I believe some very little darkening of her right cheek (on the left of the image) would better delineate her face.

Here's an illustration of what I mean, hope you don't mind me playing with it, otherwise let me know and I'll remove it:




Oh yeah, other than that, it's really nice. And OMG!, how come she has such beautiful eyes? If I ever have a daughter, I want her eyes like that!



Dec 17, 2012 at 09:09 PM



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