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KyleR.
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I went to starbucks today to visit my uncle. C&C please.

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Thanks and Happy valentines day!

Kyle

Feb 15, 2010 at 01:00 AM

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Thank Uncle Murray for letting you shoot him! Looks like a kind man and warmth and character come thru well.
First is a bit off on color balance/temp....too yellow. A bit dark beneath the brim of the hat. But I really like this image because of his character and I really like the framing.
Second is a nice candid. I think you blew out some whites, perhaps in the conversion. I really like this one as well.
Third has his warm smile, glint in his eye. Framed well, except for the unfortunately cut off fingers/hand far right. I'd crop there to remove the fingers.

Really nice series, Kyle.

Scott

Edited on Feb 15, 2010 at 01:30 AM · View previous versions

Feb 15, 2010 at 01:18 AM

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Thanks Scott for pointing those out.
Ill make the changes once I get a chance and I'm glad you like them!

Feb 15, 2010 at 01:24 AM

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p.1 #4 · Murray

I like #1.

Feb 15, 2010 at 06:17 AM

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p.1 #5 · Murray

Thanks Kaden

Feb 15, 2010 at 02:59 PM

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p.1 #6 · Murray

Ok guys I fixed the things that Scott pointed out. There much better now.

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2. I also did a little dodging to his face and sharpened a little

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Thanks,
KYle

Feb 15, 2010 at 03:42 PM

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p.1 #7 · Murray

Looking good.

Scott

Feb 15, 2010 at 04:27 PM

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p.1 #8 · Murray

Thanks Scott,
I want to get some of these printed, and this is the first time I would get some of my photos printed.
So,
I dont really know who's the best company, whats the best settings, etc. If you guys could help me out that would be great.
Thanks

Feb 15, 2010 at 04:37 PM

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I do my own printing, so I may not be the best person to ask.
But Mpix.com seems to have extremely high ratings for satisfaction and has been around. I'm sure their website has info on file size, color space to send.

Scott

Feb 15, 2010 at 06:12 PM

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p.1 #10 · Murray

Thanks Scott that site looks good.
Also, I want to enter one of these in the WA as in his face shining with joy.
Which one should I do? 1 or 3?

Thanks,
Kyle

Feb 15, 2010 at 09:52 PM


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