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Archive 2010 · Murray

  
 
KyleR.
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p.1 #1 · Murray


I went to starbucks today to visit my uncle. C&C please.

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Thanks and Happy valentines day!

Kyle




Feb 14, 2010 at 08:00 PM
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p.1 #2 · Murray


Thank Uncle Murray for letting you shoot him! Looks like a kind man and warmth and character come thru well.
First is a bit off on color balance/temp....too yellow. A bit dark beneath the brim of the hat. But I really like this image because of his character and I really like the framing.
Second is a nice candid. I think you blew out some whites, perhaps in the conversion. I really like this one as well.
Third has his warm smile, glint in his eye. Framed well, except for the unfortunately cut off fingers/hand far right. I'd crop there to remove the fingers.

Really nice series, Kyle.

Scott

Edited on Feb 14, 2010 at 08:30 PM · View previous versions



Feb 14, 2010 at 08:18 PM
KyleR.
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p.1 #3 · Murray


Thanks Scott for pointing those out.
Ill make the changes once I get a chance and I'm glad you like them!



Feb 14, 2010 at 08:24 PM
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p.1 #4 · Murray


I like #1.


Feb 15, 2010 at 01:17 AM
KyleR.
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p.1 #5 · Murray


Thanks Kaden


Feb 15, 2010 at 09:59 AM
KyleR.
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p.1 #6 · Murray


Ok guys I fixed the things that Scott pointed out. There much better now.

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2. I also did a little dodging to his face and sharpened a little



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Thanks,
KYle



Feb 15, 2010 at 10:42 AM
sbeme
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p.1 #7 · Murray


Looking good.

Scott



Feb 15, 2010 at 11:27 AM
KyleR.
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p.1 #8 · Murray


Thanks Scott,
I want to get some of these printed, and this is the first time I would get some of my photos printed.
So,
I dont really know who's the best company, whats the best settings, etc. If you guys could help me out that would be great.
Thanks



Feb 15, 2010 at 11:37 AM
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p.1 #9 · Murray


I do my own printing, so I may not be the best person to ask.
But Mpix.com seems to have extremely high ratings for satisfaction and has been around. I'm sure their website has info on file size, color space to send.

Scott



Feb 15, 2010 at 01:12 PM
KyleR.
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p.1 #10 · Murray


Thanks Scott that site looks good.
Also, I want to enter one of these in the WA as in his face shining with joy.
Which one should I do? 1 or 3?

Thanks,
Kyle



Feb 15, 2010 at 04:52 PM





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