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Re: Murray


Thank Uncle Murray for letting you shoot him! Looks like a kind man and warmth and character come thru well.
First is a bit off on color balance/temp....too yellow. A bit dark beneath the brim of the hat. But I really like this image because of his character and I really like the framing.
Second is a nice candid. I think you blew out some whites, perhaps in the conversion. I really like this one as well.
Third has his warm smile, glint in his names. Framed well, except for the unfortunately cut off fingers/hand far right. I\'d crop there to remove the fingers.

Really nice series, Kyle.

Scott



Feb 14, 2010 at 08:18 PM





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