i always find it hard to frame a piece of art but it looks like the framing and execution of the shot are perfect to me, great scene and colors, and great photo of it!maybe try pulling back some of the blacks or giving it just a tad more exposure, imho, James
sbeme wrote:
shmn, quite a bit of processing with the unprocessed RAW reduced to jpeg for web below. Taken from a parking lot shooting at a brick wall.
Processed in LR including rotation, cropping, then Color Efex Pro with a solarization filter with high saturation. Note some faces changed from off-white to black and other color shifts, apparent sharpening. Then to LR with futher boost in vibrance/saturation, some reduction in clarity to reduce the sharpening effect of the solarization filter. Vignetting to provide framing effect.