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Archive 2009 · just a few...tell me what you think. How can I improve?

  
 
rcalara
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p.1 #1 · just a few...tell me what you think. How can I improve?


Hello.

Well, I haven't really posted on this Forum, but I'm hoping to get honest opinion

1. http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_jjWo5BfOiC8/SwnJpRW6IEI/AAAAAAAAARU/ccew8EG7uFM/s1600/gl-00033.jpg

2. http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_jjWo5BfOiC8/SwnJpEtcq5I/AAAAAAAAARM/Gq62bqZy4jI/s1600/gl-00036.jpg

3. http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_jjWo5BfOiC8/SwnJptAtNjI/AAAAAAAAARk/aXF4fowFT4o/s1600/gl-00035.jpg

4. http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_jjWo5BfOiC8/SwnNucVxJsI/AAAAAAAAASU/e2CUOdc3tXw/s1600/gl-00037.jpg



Nov 22, 2009 at 06:46 PM
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p.1 #2 · just a few...tell me what you think. How can I improve?


Hi,

I much prefer the last ones to the first one - it is a technically good but uninteresting photo (and that's subjective - so dont take it to heart!). The other are much much better, stronger compositions etc.

in #2, having the people cut by the white watermark makes the image less strong unfortunatly.

Merv.



Nov 23, 2009 at 11:33 AM
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p.1 #3 · just a few...tell me what you think. How can I improve?


I like #3 the best - the colors are great and the silver smooth building in the middle is pretty cool. I agree with merv, the semi-transparent piece going through the legs of the people is a bit distracting. #4 is a bit dark for my taste, but others might like it


Nov 23, 2009 at 05:15 PM
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p.1 #4 · just a few...tell me what you think. How can I improve?


Thanks for the feedback Really do appreciate it!
I will keep them in mind when I take pictures...

Merv- You're right... the first one I really like, but I guess there's not much going on with the picture(that's why it's uninteresting to people haha- I understand what you're saying) Thanks!

Ralibali- I was playing around with my settings when taking this photo and at the same time, the sun was setting down.. so once I saw the pic on my LCD, it caught my eye... but I appreciate the feedback, nonetheless.



Nov 23, 2009 at 05:49 PM





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