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 p.1 #3 · Help/Critique on Composition | |
what bernie said. +1
Composition isn't all about which objects go where in the picture, its the balance of colour, light and shadow, so.....
the light and furniture are major distractions and one way or another shouldn't be in the shot.
skin tone and stone are very close making separation difficult this leaves a vibrant bra hanging in space (albeit smack on the bottom left thirds intersection) that is fairly evenly flesh/stone coloured.
but I think the major issue I have with this shot is the balance between the subject and background, the architecture is overtaking the picture. Given that you were using flash it might have been nice to have dropped down the background exposure a stop or 2 to allow the girl to really stand out. This might also cure the problem of her sight line running slap into a pillar.
Here's a rework, i'll pull it if you object.
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