No comments. I'll bite.
The lighting from your flash is too hard in #1 skin comes off a little white. #4 the light just doesn't work form me I find the sun hitting her right eye very distracting and the spot on her cheek also. #3 is a nice shot she seems very comfortable in this one. 3a could have worked, but if you tell them to look up at something, try to make sure it is the same thing :P. Keep er going..
Josh Evilsizor wrote:
I know we're not supposed to "critique" the model.. but I can't get past her eye makeup.. the super heavy liner just irks me and I can't get past it.
I agree. She already has big beautiful eyes and they don't need to accentuated so much.
I like the compositions, the light and the processing....except for the eyes. 2a for example looks way over the top to me. I would try backing down whatever you are doing on the eyes to about half strength. You have some nice looking shots there, you don't need to push the dial to 11...
