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lopexo
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p.1 #1 · Jordan (C&C)

this was a 2nd girl that I shot along Morgan (http://www.fredmiranda.com/forum/topic/836806)

Same lighting, equipment, etc...

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and here are a few of them together

1a.

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2a.

Nov 20, 2009 at 02:50 AM

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p.1 #2 · Jordan (C&C)

#2 is nice! Unreal eyes! Were 2 and 3 with the same lens? Very pretty girl!

Nov 20, 2009 at 03:09 AM

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p.1 #3 · Jordan (C&C)

No comments. I'll bite.
The lighting from your flash is too hard in #1 skin comes off a little white. #4 the light just doesn't work form me I find the sun hitting her right eye very distracting and the spot on her cheek also. #3 is a nice shot she seems very comfortable in this one. 3a could have worked, but if you tell them to look up at something, try to make sure it is the same thing :P. Keep er going..

Todd..

PS. Dig the logo.

Nov 20, 2009 at 03:14 AM

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p.1 #4 · Jordan (C&C)

I know we're not supposed to "critique" the model.. but I can't get past her eye makeup.. the super heavy liner just irks me and I can't get past it.

Nov 20, 2009 at 03:10 PM

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p.1 #5 · Jordan (C&C)

Josh Evilsizor wrote:
I know we're not supposed to "critique" the model.. but I can't get past her eye makeup.. the super heavy liner just irks me and I can't get past it.
I agree. She already has big beautiful eyes and they don't need to accentuated so much.

Good job on the photos.

Nov 20, 2009 at 03:14 PM

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p.1 #6 · Jordan (C&C)

second model

<3 ... I like 3 a the most . digging the colour/tone with the water

Nov 20, 2009 at 03:16 PM

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p.1 #7 · Jordan (C&C)

I like the compositions, the light and the processing....except for the eyes. 2a for example looks way over the top to me. I would try backing down whatever you are doing on the eyes to about half strength. You have some nice looking shots there, you don't need to push the dial to 11...

Nov 20, 2009 at 07:54 PM

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p.1 #8 · Jordan (C&C)

It looks like a lot of PP on their breasts and cleavage. Like in 1a.

Nov 21, 2009 at 10:30 AM

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p.1 #9 · Jordan (C&C)

Nice.

Nov 21, 2009 at 05:37 PM

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