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p.1 #1 · Portrait Project [Film]

A few terrible scans.

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-Clayton

Nov 19, 2009 at 06:59 PM

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p.1 #2 · Portrait Project [Film]

#3 has a great sense of place but could have used some better posing, not to say the pose you have is bad but I would have liked to see a few more of her facing the camera in that setting. the third shot is heads above the rest
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Nov 19, 2009 at 09:47 PM

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p.1 #3 · Portrait Project [Film]

Thank you, Doug. I quite liked #3, as well.

Nov 20, 2009 at 05:25 AM

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p.1 #4 · Portrait Project [Film]

I like the comp of #3, but I don't care much for the model's pose. Same as above.

I don't care much for the clutter in #2. Everything seems to be in the way, including the model's hair.

#1 is very PJ-esque, though I"m a little confused about the purpose of the karate kid-like bandanna and OJ bottle...and the shoes don't really fit the scene.

Nov 20, 2009 at 05:37 AM

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