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not sure this has anything to do w/ your inquiry/booking rate, but here's my immediate reaction: i'm a little confused.
the initial reaction to the blog is wow! love the red, and the header images are strong, particularly the gown shot. as a chick, i'm drawn to your aesthetic. then i click ABOUT and that's when things start to get weird.
had i not known from the forums that you're a guy, i would be very taken aback by the fact - it doesn't help that in your bio image you're staring off screen and looking like you're straight out of american chopper. that in itself is not a bad thing (i'm married to a guy who looks a lot like you) but the feminine logo & aesthetic paired with the tough guy pic is befuddling.
then you combine that with the boring 2-line bio with a link to a random "free" website with funky link (why is it Wedding-Photographer) and you've lost me. just too many "huh" moments in a market that i'm sure is saturated with photographers. i'd be clicking on to the next guy, despite being initially drawn to your images.
clearly you're a guy with personality. time to take a good hard look at branding and really clarify the image that you're putting out there.
what else?
-i want an obvious direct link to a portfolio, not to have to weed through "categories" like you suggest in your "announcements". there are way too many images in your blog posts. use the blog as a chance share your best from a single wedding. it should entice potential clients into wanting to see more of your portfolio. if you're showing me everything, i don't have a reason to get in touch with you to inquire about more.
-that portfolio (if not built into the site) should take me to a site with consistent name usage. if you're going to use shannon price photo, use it. i have no idea what or who better visions photo is and i'm not interested enough to figure it out.
-i dont understand your "links" tab. just listing a bunch of photographers you like doesn't in anyway appeal to or connect with brides. you also have "links" and "blogroll" (which is populated with the generic wordpress stuff. yikes!)
-have someone review or write your copy. lines like "Im am going to take a few moments on why it pays to hire a pro. I imagine I am a lil biased of course… but in the following post I will inform you realistically of why not to count on uncle Bob." are really off-putting. sounds like a middle schooler wrote it.
phew. hope that helps!
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