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p.3 #20 · The 'Flower' part of Nature (6) | |
KirkB wrote:
Part I Oh dear... poor Z m... 
#1 is terrific Karl, I love the composition and the burst of color that radiates from the center of that Mum is amazing! Excellent work here buddy. 
#2 Orchid is both beautiful and alien looking at the same time, pretty cool. Beautiful colors and patterns, I like it. 
#3 Brilliant color, very nice comp, with texture and detail that is touchable. I do find the stem a little distracting, but what are you going to do. Well done.
#4 My second favorite to #1... beautiful color, wonderful comp, and again I love the texture and detail you've captured here for our enjoyment.
#5 Very simple lines and the color just pops off the screen, and I really like the BG here a lot.
#6 Beautiful color once again but this one doesn't work as well for me because of the in focus petals of the BG flower protruding into the middle of the image. They compete for the attention of my eye that I want to focus on the center of the FG Mum. Nit. 
That's a lot more than 2 cents worth... go ahead and keep the change. 
Beautiful subjects and excellent work buddy, all good for the soul. 
Kirk
#3 the stem is there to anchor the flower though attachment is a bit imaginary
#5 glad you like, I at first was going to pass on it but took a liking to it too
#6 I agree and a valid nit!
I will save the 'overage' and kindly return it in the near future my friend
Many thanks for the detailed critique............
Karl
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