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Al B
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p.1 #1 · Steppin' Out... PNW- BW- revised


Some of you may remember the colour version of this capture I took this last
summer at the PNW. Now that I have completed this gallery I went back to this image
which I always felt may have some possibilities in the B &W format.

I'd be curious to hear your comments.

Thanks
Al B

http://www.pbase.com/al_b/image/119085972/original.jpg

Link to the coloured version:
http://www.pbase.com/al_b/image/117393926/original

Edited on Nov 06, 2009 at 07:32 AM · View previous versions



Nov 05, 2009 at 12:19 PM
Adrian Cray
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p.1 #2 · Steppin' Out... PNW- BW- revised


Hi Al ,

This version seems to work very well , with a good range of tones throughout the picture . I must have missed the colour version . Perhaps you may wish to post a link thereto ?

Afternote : Thanks for the link , Al . The colour version has the more summery look to it , but the B&W allows you to concentrate more on the detail and different mood conveyed . I think I'll take one of each !

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Nov 05, 2009 at 12:25 PM
Al B
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p.1 #3 · Steppin' Out... PNW- BW- revised


Adrian Cray wrote:
Hi Al ,

This version seems to work very well , with a good range of tones throughout the picture . I must have missed the colour version . Perhaps you may wish to post a link thereto ?



Hello colonel, great to hear from you! Sorry for being remiss in not posting the earlier colour version link. I have now included a link back to this version. Wonderful to hear from you again. I have been thoroughly enjoying your recent offerings.

Best Al B



Nov 05, 2009 at 12:28 PM
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p.1 #4 · Steppin' Out... PNW- BW- revised


Al
The conversion works well for me. The bump in contrast in this shot makes for a sharper sea stack. It is always a trade-off when converting to BW. What you get in drama, you must give away some of the color variations that help identify with the scene. I like it.



Nov 05, 2009 at 07:59 PM
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p.1 #5 · Steppin' Out... PNW- BW- revised


Al

Very nice comp and great conversion here this really works very nicely in B&W

Ray Still



Nov 05, 2009 at 08:45 PM
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p.1 #6 · Steppin' Out... PNW- BW- revised


Works quite nicely Al - and I can't even see the teeming hordes of unwashed masses we encountered that afternoon

Good call on the BW conversion.

Alan



Nov 05, 2009 at 09:19 PM
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p.1 #7 · Steppin' Out... PNW- BW- revised


Hey Al,

I definately like this better in B&W. 2 suggestions. Layer mask just the water, and bring down the blacks or perhaps midtones a bit more. And then for both the color and the B&W, can you recover more of that water detail that is lost in the wave breaks? I think in such a nice shot, having the water lacking detail there ends up sticking out then...

Jim



Nov 05, 2009 at 10:42 PM
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p.1 #8 · Steppin' Out... PNW- BW- revised


This is quite harsh and contrasty but it suits the scene.
Good vision, Al.
Ute



Nov 06, 2009 at 02:10 AM
Al B
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p.1 #9 · Steppin' Out... PNW- BW- revised


Tim, Ray, Alan, Jim and Ute. Thanks everyone. After I complete my gallery from our trips I usually scout out images for B & W and this one seemed to fit the bill.

Jim - two good suggestions. I was going for a high contrasty image but I do agree there should be a bit more detail that could be recovered in the waves.

Ute - I agree that is why I felt it would be good candidate for the conversion.

Appreciate ALL comments and than you for your continued support of my work.


Al B



Nov 06, 2009 at 06:58 AM
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p.1 #10 · Steppin' Out... PNW- BW- revised


Excellent conversion, Al, works very nicely.
By a small margin though, I prefer the color one. The color contrasts let the rocks stand out from the sea a bit easier, imho. And I love the shades of blues/greens you caught in the surf. Call me contrarian I guess.

Barry



Nov 06, 2009 at 07:27 AM
Al B
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p.1 #11 · Steppin' Out... PNW- BW- revised


JimFox wrote:
Hey Al,

I definately like this better in B&W. 2 suggestions. Layer mask just the water, and bring down the blacks or perhaps midtones a bit more. And then for both the color and the B&W, can you recover more of that water detail that is lost in the wave breaks? I think in such a nice shot, having the water lacking detail there ends up sticking out then...

Jim


Hi Jim,
I like your suggestions. I tried to still maintain the high contrasty image effect. I pulled a bit of the blacks out of the water and reduced the highlights on the white caps as you suggested. Hope you like the difference.

http://www.pbase.com/al_b/image/119104958/original.jpg

Al B



Nov 06, 2009 at 07:31 AM
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p.1 #12 · Steppin' Out... PNW- BW- revised


bshamilton wrote:
Excellent conversion, Al, works very nicely.
By a small margin though, I prefer the color one. The color contrasts let the rocks stand out from the sea a bit easier, imho. And I love the shades of blues/greens you caught in the surf. Call me contrarian I guess.

Barry


Thanks Barry, I do to. This was not meant to be a comparison but merely another
expression of this scene. I am huge fan of B & W comps so I always like to keep this part of the processing technique current.

Al B



Nov 06, 2009 at 12:32 PM
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p.1 #13 · Steppin' Out... PNW- BW- revised


Very good job on this, Al, but I can't help I like the color version better.
Karl



Nov 06, 2009 at 03:03 PM
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p.1 #14 · Steppin' Out... PNW- BW- revised


kschweichhart wrote:
Very good job on this, Al, but I can't help I like the color version better.
Karl



Thanks Karl I like the colour version as well for its strong colour presence. Still the B & W changes the mood of course and offer a more engaging detailed look.

Al B



Nov 07, 2009 at 07:44 AM





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