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Nike SBd Offline Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #1 · 2010 Toyota Yaris S - Take a look! So when I first edited this shot I didn't really like it, but I thought it had some potential and went back in and brought out certain areas to make it more interesting... now I think I dig it. Questions/Comments? I decided to add a blog post with the whole image build if anyone is interested in seeing before/after. Edit - I moved a couple of color edits to the top, these are the final four, let me know which one you like best... I kept #2 at the same spot and the last one is named #5 since that's what number it was in my first edit post 1 2 3 "5" Edited on Nov 05, 2009 at 08:48 PM · View previous versions Nov 05, 2009 at 01:36 AM

papageno Offline Dedicated FM Upload & Sell: On p.1 #2 · 2010 Toyota Yaris S - Take a look! Try it with very dark pavement..... Could use the white thing as a billboard/type balloon........... Nov 05, 2009 at 04:31 AM

sirimiri Offline Upload & Sell: On p.1 #3 · 2010 Toyota Yaris S - Take a look! 1. The car looks crookedly placed, as in, the image subject is mis-aligned. It doesn't look sufficiently level, nor is it crooked enough to be "dynamic" 2. Though I personally like the red on red as a color concept, for me there is insufficient foreground/background separation 3. If you're going to shoot the vehicle earnestly, remove the plate and associated holder 4. could you pop a remote flash or strobe inside the car, to lighting up or somehow provoke interest in the interior? Pure black-out isn't that compelling for me. 5. the white square - perhaps it's best blank, but this seems like some branding of a sort could go there? That's about as "harsh" and "honest" as I can probably get. Overall I like this image quite a bit. Nov 05, 2009 at 04:40 AM

Nike SBd Offline Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #4 · 2010 Toyota Yaris S - Take a look! updated first post Nov 05, 2009 at 08:49 PM

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