I like 6, probably for the same reason you do. All wrong, but so right in so many ways.
5 is odd focus-y issues to me, or I need to take out my contacts maybe..not sure.
Nice session.
One thing to keep an eye on... chopped limbs mostly joints, hand and foot. Sometimes (not always, some can pull it off) it makes the picture feel "not right"... whatever that means
Thanks for all the c&c, friends You are right about the PP-- I do a tiny bit in LR, just bought it, but that's about it. I thought about Kubota actions-- maybe this winter I'll play around more.
I'll be sending the couple 100 or so pics, just taking out the blinks and really bad ones. I figure they might like some I don't. My first couple chose one for the newspaper that I thought was just average, but they looked slim and hot, so in it went.
I thought maybe I should post a few more that may be better than the original posted ones for the reasons you pointed out. I will be posting a dozen for them today-- a little sneak peek. Any suggestions? Let me know if there are any that stand out as ones they'd want for profile pics on there.
So, if you'd like to help me choose a few for their sneak peek, that's be cool. It's really hard for me to tell which ones are better than others at this point. Like I said earlier-- if the couple looks great in a shot, they'll end up liking those the best, the poses/backgrounds/artistic stuff is usually icing on the cake from their perspective. At least this is what I've noticed with my very very limited experience.
. I am very new to this. These are a few I took last night. C&C welcome. 
My only critique is that they could use a bit more punch~ but they are great!
