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littleme Offline Image Upload: Off p.1 #1 · Newbie fall e-shoot at university Hello all . I am very new to this. These are a few I took last night. C&C welcome. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. Should have changed stops... 6. Shooting wide open here, too soft, but I like it for some reason... 7. The spot where they met 8. 9. 10. 11. 12. 13. 14. 15. Thanks! Nov 02, 2009 at 06:07 PM

jamphan Offline Image Upload: On p.1 #2 · Newbie fall e-shoot at university I think you did a great job! #6 is the only one I would pull. Very blurry focus and a strange comp. Nice set. Nov 02, 2009 at 06:16 PM

sandierox Offline Image Upload: Off p.1 #3 · Newbie fall e-shoot at university Oh love the last shot with the ring Looks like a great set. I like #4 the best Nov 02, 2009 at 06:17 PM

HJ_Mayes Offline Image Upload: On p.1 #4 · Newbie fall e-shoot at university I like 6, probably for the same reason you do. All wrong, but so right in so many ways. 5 is odd focus-y issues to me, or I need to take out my contacts maybe..not sure. Love the ring shot. Nov 02, 2009 at 08:06 PM

ClareinME Online Image Upload: Off p.1 #5 · Newbie fall e-shoot at university Nice job My only critique is that they could use a bit more punch~ but they are great! I too like #6 for some reason Nov 02, 2009 at 08:13 PM

sherijohnson Offline Image Upload: Off p.1 #6 · Newbie fall e-shoot at university wow! you did a great job on this shoot Nov 02, 2009 at 08:19 PM

mserrano Offline Image Upload: Off p.1 #7 · Newbie fall e-shoot at university Nice session. One thing to keep an eye on... chopped limbs mostly joints, hand and foot. Sometimes (not always, some can pull it off) it makes the picture feel "not right"... whatever that means Nov 02, 2009 at 11:13 PM

James R Offline Image Upload: On p.1 #8 · Newbie fall e-shoot at university Don't throw #6 out. I think the couple will appreciate the shot. Nov 03, 2009 at 04:00 AM

Jed Eltom Offline Image Upload: Off p.1 #9 · Newbie fall e-shoot at university Nice work. It's lacking in the PP department, but otherwise you did a good job overall. Nov 03, 2009 at 04:05 AM

Mr. Malik Offline Image Upload: Off p.1 #10 · Newbie fall e-shoot at university I think these are decent and the couple will be happy with the results Nov 03, 2009 at 11:45 AM

littleme Offline Image Upload: Off p.1 #11 · Newbie fall e-shoot at university Thanks for all the c&c, friends You are right about the PP-- I do a tiny bit in LR, just bought it, but that's about it. I thought about Kubota actions-- maybe this winter I'll play around more. I'll be sending the couple 100 or so pics, just taking out the blinks and really bad ones. I figure they might like some I don't. My first couple chose one for the newspaper that I thought was just average, but they looked slim and hot, so in it went. I thought maybe I should post a few more that may be better than the original posted ones for the reasons you pointed out. I will be posting a dozen for them today-- a little sneak peek. Any suggestions? Let me know if there are any that stand out as ones they'd want for profile pics on there. 18. Better comp with the rail 19. Slightly better crop IMO 20. Vertical version-- there was a parking lot to the left 21. Another angle 22. Without the flair... 23. Another from diff angle, she moved forward a bit when she giggled causing the blown out face and oof bit, still think it's cute though 24. Correct f-stop, I don't dig the comp 25. A sharper closer crop of the archway-- I prefer this to the original post 26. Cuddling 27. This one is growing on me 28. Maybe this works? It looks like he's feeling it and she isn't, to me 29. I like the pose much more than the background 30. A piggy back one without the tree branch "going through" her head 31. Poor comp, cute moment 32. With the focus on her face instead of the ring- 33. Another ring shot, but I still prefer the rose one. I'll have to work to get all diamonds in focus on their wedding day. So, if you'd like to help me choose a few for their sneak peek, that's be cool. It's really hard for me to tell which ones are better than others at this point. Like I said earlier-- if the couple looks great in a shot, they'll end up liking those the best, the poses/backgrounds/artistic stuff is usually icing on the cake from their perspective. At least this is what I've noticed with my very very limited experience. --Lisa Nov 03, 2009 at 04:22 PM

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