Archive 2009 · Sarah pt 2

Jay Kopinski
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p.1 #1 · Sarah pt 2

Few more portraits done in low light and b+w. Keep in mind I'm a hockey guy lol

Oct 31, 2009 at 11:09 AM

Steady Hand
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p.1 #2 · Sarah pt 2

Hi,

I think your second image is much nicer than most I see in this POV.

Well done on that one!

Minor stuff could be changed...but the expression is what makes this so nice (to my eyes).

I hope these comments help you.

Oct 31, 2009 at 11:40 AM

williamkazak
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p.1 #3 · Sarah pt 2

You sort of lost one of the eyes in the second pic. I would have opened up more.
Happy halloween in the first pic?

Oct 31, 2009 at 11:48 AM

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p.1 #4 · Sarah pt 2

i don't understand the scarf in 1, it doesn't help

prh

Oct 31, 2009 at 04:39 PM

Jay Kopinski
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p.1 #5 · Sarah pt 2

Just something playful and to concentrate focus on the eyes.

Nov 04, 2009 at 12:41 AM

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p.1 #6 · Sarah pt 2

As prh5551 has already mentioned, the scarf, in #1, elludes me. I also think it adds little to the shot, but that is entirely my taste.

However, I like #2 quite a lot. The expression makes it for me, technicalities be darned.

Nov 04, 2009 at 03:31 AM

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p.1 #7 · Sarah pt 2

the scarf in one is fine if I could see both eyes.

Nov 04, 2009 at 08:20 AM

Rags Hef
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p.1 #8 · Sarah pt 2

The grain quality in #2 is an interesting effect and improves the mood of the image.

The hair position in #1 castes an unfixable shadow for her eye/cheek. If you try to lighten her eye she would look like an alien. Seems to me the dynamic range is too great between the two eyes.

Good early effort

just my .02

Rags

Nov 04, 2009 at 09:57 AM


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