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 p.1 #8 · D1 Hockey DU vs Minesota State 10-30 | |
Nothing necessarily wrong with the IQ in the images, and as Rick said even your WB is good here.
But there's nothing about these images that tells me anything. The first is a tight crop potentially of a goalie stretching. The second is a great snow-show with no face and no puck. The third looks like a pretty good crunch and likely your best shot, although again no eyes - I understand difficult to get them from your vantage point on THIS particular shot. The fourth is a face-off scrum, the fifth apparently a ceremony (text may have helped put some context to it), and the last one a repost of the third.
I'm wondering if the 400 is just plain too long for your shooting location... or are these cropped down heavily? Tight is right, I realize, but there still has to be some emotion or context to the shot.
Keep at it, you're off and running, but try to capture something that tells the viewer something. Faces are a NEAR-must, and I always try to get the puck in the frame too. Shooting from up high presents some challenges no doubt, but maybe aim for players carrying the puck out so you get them facing you, or coming away from the corners. Those will tell the tale.
Still - your IQ is good, so as I said, now just need to worry about grabbing the action that sells your shots.
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