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Jeremy Watson
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p.1 #1 · RGB boats in the river


Have you ever had a picture which, when you look back on it, could have been so much more? This is that picture for me. Absolutely no color alterations, some light post processing and a horizontal flip. I could not resist making the boats go in the correct color order...



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All critique is greatly appreciated.

Oct 29, 2009 at 03:17 AM
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p.1 #2 · RGB boats in the river


If you don't mind some PS changes, you could go for more blatant color:








Oct 29, 2009 at 04:30 AM
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p.1 #3 · RGB boats in the river


Nice image.
I like your idea of sequencing RGB but not sure everyone will get it.
I prefer the original in terms of the boat color. On my better monitor, the reds appear a bit too much and might need the saturation pulled back a bit. Karen's (AuntiPode's) re-work improves the water and you might play with the contrast and pull in some blues into the water, selectively.

Scott

Oct 29, 2009 at 03:22 PM
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p.1 #4 · RGB boats in the river


Thanks for the advice, I just got home from work. When I look at it it looks... tilted. Just not quite right.

I like the idea of popping just the color of the water, I will give that a shot.

Oct 29, 2009 at 10:16 PM
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