Boat feels lost among the others and is too centered in the frame. I'm not sure about your shooting options, but I'd like to see the sailboat larger. As shot, I'd crop quite a bit from the top and right, placing the boat in the right third and creating a pano crop. Then I'd clone out the parts of the boats at the left edge and left corner of the frame.
Looks to me like the white balance is off, too magenta.
sbeme wrote:
Ah, back to Camden!
Any Camden cows?
Used to visit after the Trek Across Maine, and when my son spent summers at camp in Washington.
Scott
Yea I want to go back and take more photos as the light in the AM was flat but Oh that night .
Did not think about cows as we have some black angus
I saw your cow photo ,nice gallery .
Kaden K. wrote:
Nice. I would tighten up that composition and improve overall treatment of the image.
Thanks kaden . Not sure what you mean about tighten up as vast space of the sea is important to the photo.
I find the central location of the red yacht a bit dull, but if you like, obviously you want it there. Given what you want for the image, I'd suggest cloning out all masts without complete boats and all the unattached mooring buoys, partial boats, white specs around the entrance and perhaps the channel marker above the red yacht. That should reduce the clutter.
This photo was taken at almost dark so the the buoys are how the picture was seen and this was a long ways away with a 200mm .
I do agree about cloning the mast out on the left.
Thanks for your comments.
It depends upon your intent. If you lean towards straight reportage you must keep what's there, warts and all. If you lean towards art, what matters is the result.
,nice gallery .