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Archive 2009 · Half Dome in Half-tone

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p.1 #1 · Half Dome in Half-tone

Well, not exactly but critiques on the landscape forum said this was asking to be converted to B&W so here its.
C&C welcomed
Niall

Oct 22, 2009 at 05:40 PM

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p.1 #2 · Half Dome in Half-tone

unique shooting of that old rock. I like the composition, but the contrast is weak;
brighter whites would really add drama to your image.
regards, tom

Oct 22, 2009 at 05:53 PM

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p.1 #3 · Half Dome in Half-tone

+1. I really like the comp.

Peace,

Todd

Oct 23, 2009 at 10:35 AM

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p.1 #4 · Half Dome in Half-tone

Epic

Oct 23, 2009 at 10:57 AM

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p.1 #5 · Half Dome in Half-tone

Niall,

This is a great shot and great composition. What did you use for B&W conversion ? you should try to make the clouds pop a little more... this is a great pic but I think it has even greater potential.

Oct 23, 2009 at 01:07 PM

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p.1 #6 · Half Dome in Half-tone

I use an action called B&WMF followed by detoning but I, too am not very pleased with it and will have another try.

Oct 23, 2009 at 03:25 PM

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p.1 #7 · Half Dome in Half-tone

Contrast looks a bit dull, and it is much too centered for me.

ek

Oct 23, 2009 at 11:39 PM

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p.1 #8 · Half Dome in Half-tone

mind if I give it a try?
want to send the RAW or a larger file in color?

Scott

Oct 24, 2009 at 06:46 PM

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p.1 #9 · Half Dome in Half-tone

I like the tonal range in the last one the most, but the bigger size that you posted as the second picture would benefit the image.

Oct 28, 2009 at 02:46 PM

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p.1 #10 · Half Dome in Half-tone

I am think ing that the central placement of the subject might not be the strongest composition from this POV.

Jerry

Oct 29, 2009 at 07:50 AM

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p.1 #11 · Half Dome in Half-tone

I like the work on the last one a lot.

And I like the composition. It is a different take on half dome and it strongly divides the sediment side (right) vs. rocky crags (left). Note: I'm not a geologist

Oct 29, 2009 at 09:46 AM

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p.1 #12 · Half Dome in Half-tone

I think the image is strong enough with it's composition, but I wouldn't mind seeing a little more of the rock on the left. A panorama might have worked nicely.

Oct 29, 2009 at 11:56 AM

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p.1 #13 · Half Dome in Half-tone

I think the image is strong enough with it's composition, but I wouldn't mind seeing a little more of the rock on the left. A panorama might have worked nicely.

Oct 29, 2009 at 11:57 AM


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