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p.1 #1 · Portrait C&C

Looking for some feedback good bad ugly whatever!

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Jul 14, 2009 at 04:03 AM

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p.1 #2 · Portrait C&C

Good lighting, good exposure, You didn't have enough patience for a good expression.

Jul 14, 2009 at 04:11 AM

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p.1 #3 · Portrait C&C

Good lighting, good exposure, You didn't have enough patience for a good expression.

Jul 14, 2009 at 04:11 AM

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p.1 #4 · Portrait C&C

I'm seeing halo around the image (may not show up larger though) and a few things stick out to me as things that could be improved. As pilles mentioned, the expression could be better. I feel that the collar could have be fixed before the capture and that the light on her hair on our left is a bit much. I find the coloring of the background to be a bit odd and find myself wishing I was seeing her rich skin tone instead of having my attention called to the featureless background. Hope this helps.

Jul 14, 2009 at 04:27 AM

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p.1 #5 · Portrait C&C

J Bond great comments I agree the kicker in the back is strong on her left side.

Jul 14, 2009 at 04:29 AM

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p.1 #6 · Portrait C&C

I rather like the expression, and I don't mind the collar. I'm in my 50's and realize that my fashion sense may not be in sync with the younger, hipper kids of today.

My only nit is I would prefer to see the area around the eyes and forehead a bit lighter with the darker areas below. With the hat, I know I couldn't do it, but maybe someone with more skill could.

I like the portrait. I get the feeling that this little girl is much more aware of the world than we give her credit for.

Bob

Jul 14, 2009 at 04:34 AM


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