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Bill C
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p.1 #1 · Young Model


I took a lighting class last year, and I grabbed this shot of the model at one of the breaks. I'm taking another lighting class this fall as I have so much to learn.
I think this shot may work better if I cropped just below her left shoulder. I left a touch of color in lips and eyes. ... Update - at Tim's suggestion I did another version ... see 3rd message below
Bill
http://twinoakphoto.zenfolio.com/img/v5/p827099086.jpg
http://twinoakphoto.zenfolio.com/img/v5/p767710961.jpg

Edited on Jul 08, 2009 at 07:48 PM · View previous versions



Jul 08, 2009 at 04:45 PM
Tim ONeill
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p.1 #2 · Young Model


Bill
I like your approach. The second crop is better I think. I like the slight coloration of the important elements, but I might have preferred it in more of a black and white than the sepia. It works very well as is.



Jul 08, 2009 at 07:35 PM
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p.1 #3 · Young Model


Tim ONeill wrote:
Bill
I like your approach. The second crop is better I think. I like the slight coloration of the important elements, but I might have preferred it in more of a black and white than the sepia. It works very well as is.

Tim - thanks for taking the time to comment. In my BW conversions I have a tough time decided what tinting to go with. I thought a brownish/sepia tint would be warmer. Here is another version different toning.
Regards,
Bill
http://twinoakphoto.zenfolio.com/img/v5/p46201998.jpg



Jul 08, 2009 at 07:47 PM
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p.1 #4 · Young Model


Even better Bill.

Quite a bit more exotic. Nice looking lady, with classic profile and good capture of the tints and tones.



Jul 08, 2009 at 09:44 PM





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