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p.1 #1 · Pacific Beach, CA


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http://skibum4.smugmug.com/photos/581935270_PbCso-X2.jpg





Jul 04, 2009 at 11:09 PM
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p.1 #2 · Pacific Beach, CA


Interesting shots here. I like your processing in most of them, a bit different with that darker sepia type mood. My favorites are #1 and 3. I like that darker look that is causing darker shadows and hiding more detail. That's why I don't care for #2, because it takes on more of a snapshot look.

#4 I think is too off balance, there is no flow with the pier taking up so much of the shot and then that person standing there.

And the last one, I guess those are your shadows in the shot, but that is not a landscape shot... it's a shot of an apartment building, so it really doesn't fit here nor does it match the fine tone and mood of your previous shots.

Jim



Jul 05, 2009 at 04:28 PM
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p.1 #3 · Pacific Beach, CA


JimFox wrote:
Interesting shots here. I like your processing in most of them, a bit different with that darker sepia type mood. My favorites are #1 and 3. I like that darker look that is causing darker shadows and hiding more detail. That's why I don't care for #2, because it takes on more of a snapshot look.

#4 I think is too off balance, there is no flow with the pier taking up so much of the shot and then that person standing there.

And the last one, I guess those are your shadows in the shot, but that is not
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yeah the exposure is a bit more dramtic on #1 and #3 although I kind of thought #2 flowed and in combination with some of the stances

yeah, #4, originally I had a different crop, then I chopped it down to this, then I wasn't sure if that was wise and it seems like it in some ways it seemed interesting but in some ways felt unbalanced anyway looks like I shoudl go back to the original with that one I think you are right

#5 i kinda though the shadows and the wild, dramatic colors were sort of neat, quite a few people who walked buy a took a pic of it. I still think it is a landscape, it's not really an architectural shot, granted not a natural landscape shot though




Jul 06, 2009 at 12:06 AM
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p.1 #4 · Pacific Beach, CA


nice shadows, you think?


Jul 06, 2009 at 01:11 AM





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