Jim Rickards Offline Dedicated FM Upload & Sell: Off
|
p.1 #12 · Model Gwenny From Belgium | |
Good work on these.
In #2, what I notice most is how you set the scene up. She is not just laying there, she's doing something and that makes it look real and unposed.
I noticed the wrinkles too, but then I asked myself why that would be a problem, and how distracting that is. Also, isn't it natural to have wrinkles when you lay on a fabric?
I agree with Spyro P about a bit more room above her head.
Oh, and your English is just fine. Some mistakes but it is very readable and easily understood.
|