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Pfiltz wrote:
Learn to expose properly
This is silly advice as a response to these images. The exposures are very much in the range of workable, sellable shots.
If I were to give advice for improvement, I would start with posing and clothing consultation (for the family shot), and post processing. Like the OP said, he isn't very good with PS. These images look SOOC-ish for the most part, and as ladytx has shown, a little P/P can do a lot. These are great starting points, but it will help a lot to work on your PS and LR chops.
Also, when you are shooting someone lying down, imagine them standing up, and put your lights where you would (relative to the subject) if they were standing up. Compare the catchlights in the eyes of the family shot, where the child is upright to the ones where he is lying down and you will see a difference. We don't want to light people from below (generally), so we also don't want to see catchlights in the bottoms of the irises in the lying down shots. Hope this helps some.
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