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Bob Jarman
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Your thoughts & comments appreciated: composition, processing, general impressions



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thanks,

Bob

Apr 06, 2009 at 10:02 PM
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Excellent close up. Cute name.








Apr 07, 2009 at 12:42 AM
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I like the close up, the intensity, of course the eyes. But I'd prefer more DOF on this one. Bothers me a bit.
Scott

Apr 07, 2009 at 01:03 AM
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I've a tuxedo cat and I know dark fur is difficult. You've done a good job with Inky's eyes. Inky's fur is pretty good, but it might benefit from some PS smart sharpen (gaussian blur of 2 - 5 pixels, perhaps).

Apr 07, 2009 at 03:08 AM
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I actually happen to like the DOF on this image. Its one of the things that attracts
me to close ups, differing choices on focus within the same image.

Apr 07, 2009 at 04:23 AM
 



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Kaden,

You know I am challenged with blue-ish, green-ish casts Your re-work is dead-on the original.

Scott, AuntiPode,

The image was a spur-of-the-moment thing, HH, he was sitting in the doorway. The original is a bit soft so I went with that - I'll see what I can do on the sharpening-blurring scale. My intent was to get his eyes and let the rest fall where it may.

As an observation, I noticed, for me at least, the image looks much better when viewed from a distance, say 8-10 feet (2.5 - 3.5 m) so the size posted might not be suitable. In this case smaller might be better - I'll have a go at it later today.

thanks for looking and your comments/suggestions,

Bob

mod on non-calibrated monitor..tried to incorporate suggestions...



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our daughter's cat weighs ~15lb and not an ounce of fat on him - huge

Bob



Apr 07, 2009 at 10:53 AM
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We have a siamese cat at around the same weight, and then a white cat at
39 lb. The funniest part was when a friend visited us and on the way out he
mentioned how our white dog was a nice looking dog....

Apr 07, 2009 at 01:51 PM
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Bob... I llike your rework - not that the original wasn't already good You got some great input here ...Black close-up subjects are quite challenging, aren't they?

Best, Bee

Apr 12, 2009 at 11:16 PM
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Thanks Bee,

Yes, the input helped, otherwise I would have stopped at the original post.

Regards,

Bob

Apr 12, 2009 at 11:54 PM
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