Hey,
i have a new website and would love to see what the experts have to say.
I still have to organize the photos by categories but it is hard as I shoot so many different subjects.
It´s called Desfocado and it means "out of focus" in Portuguese. And yes, some of them are
Striking! Crisp, clean, linear and so graphic. Nice compositions, great colors and tones. Beautifully seen and captured images across the board. Really enjoyed the slideshow.
The only other comment I have is one that you have addressed - the need for some sort of organization. Grouping your images (even if they are only loosely related) makes it easier for the viewer to navigate your site.
You have some nice pictures but it is not clear what the purpose of the website is - to show your work to friends or sell your photography. This looks like more of the former.
If selling I woudl break it up more into groups and pare the images down.
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AuntiPode wrote:
Slideshow demonstrates a superb eye for graphic elements, artfully captured. One of the best collections I've seen.
Those are some really nice words. Txs a lot.
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Scott Stoness wrote:
You have some nice pictures but it is not clear what the purpose of the website is - to show your work to friends or sell your photography. This looks like more of the former.
If selling I woudl break it up more into groups and pare the images down.
Scott
You are so right about that. I MUST break them down into groups. Txs a lot for your comments
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steveaphoto wrote:
great site cool images great work. take a look at mine let me know what you think www.stevea.ca
Txs Steve. I took a look at your website, and it is very good. First of all: the website itself. It is very simple and easy to navigate. I absolutely love the way the picture resizes itself when we increase or decrease the windows´ size. Very clever. How do u do that?
The photos: I particulary like the ones with the yeallow background and wood allaround, and the beauty section.
Very crisp and well lit.
Good job.
