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p.1 #1 · New website - "Out of Focus" - Critique?

Hey,
i have a new website and would love to see what the experts have to say.
I still have to organize the photos by categories but it is hard as I shoot so many different subjects.

It´s called Desfocado and it means "out of focus" in Portuguese. And yes, some of them are

Would love to hear what you think.
txs

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Apr 03, 2009 at 11:23 AM

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p.1 #2 · New website - "Out of Focus" - Critique?

link corrected

Apr 03, 2009 at 03:15 PM

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p.1 #3 · New website - "Out of Focus" - Critique?

Vasco gostei das tuas imagems e da tua website.

Cores, formas, e composicoes bonitinhas.

Apr 03, 2009 at 06:24 PM

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Kaden K. wrote:
Vasco gostei das tuas imagems e da tua website.

Cores, formas, e composicoes bonitinhas.
Obrigado. Where are you from ? Brasil?

Apr 03, 2009 at 07:02 PM

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p.1 #5 · New website - "Out of Focus" - Critique?

Slideshow demonstrates a superb eye for graphic elements, artfully captured. One of the best collections I've seen.

Apr 03, 2009 at 09:25 PM

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p.1 #6 · New website - "Out of Focus" - Critique?

I love the thumbnails below the slideshow, they were carefully picked. And I entirely echo the comments of one above.

Apr 04, 2009 at 03:15 AM

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p.1 #7 · New website - "Out of Focus" - Critique?

Striking! Crisp, clean, linear and so graphic. Nice compositions, great colors and tones. Beautifully seen and captured images across the board. Really enjoyed the slideshow.
The only other comment I have is one that you have addressed - the need for some sort of organization. Grouping your images (even if they are only loosely related) makes it easier for the viewer to navigate your site.

Apr 04, 2009 at 04:08 AM

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p.1 #8 · New website - "Out of Focus" - Critique?

You have some nice pictures but it is not clear what the purpose of the website is - to show your work to friends or sell your photography. This looks like more of the former.

If selling I woudl break it up more into groups and pare the images down.

Scott

Apr 04, 2009 at 04:52 AM

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p.1 #9 · New website - "Out of Focus" - Critique?

Brazil?!? Nao, alfacinha na parte do pai.

Apr 04, 2009 at 05:35 AM

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p.1 #10 · New website - "Out of Focus" - Critique?

great site cool images great work. take a look at mine let me know what you think www.stevea.ca

Apr 04, 2009 at 10:00 PM

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p.1 #11 · New website - "Out of Focus" - Critique?

AuntiPode wrote:
Slideshow demonstrates a superb eye for graphic elements, artfully captured. One of the best collections I've seen.
Those are some really nice words. Txs a lot.

Apr 05, 2009 at 05:49 PM

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p.1 #12 · New website - "Out of Focus" - Critique?

Scott Stoness wrote:
You have some nice pictures but it is not clear what the purpose of the website is - to show your work to friends or sell your photography. This looks like more of the former.

If selling I woudl break it up more into groups and pare the images down.

Scott
You are so right about that. I MUST break them down into groups. Txs a lot for your comments

Apr 05, 2009 at 05:50 PM

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p.1 #13 · New website - "Out of Focus" - Critique?

steveaphoto wrote:
great site cool images great work. take a look at mine let me know what you think www.stevea.ca

Txs Steve. I took a look at your website, and it is very good. First of all: the website itself. It is very simple and easy to navigate. I absolutely love the way the picture resizes itself when we increase or decrease the windows´ size. Very clever. How do u do that?

The photos: I particulary like the ones with the yeallow background and wood allaround, and the beauty section.
Very crisp and well lit.
Good job.

Apr 05, 2009 at 05:58 PM

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