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Archive 2009 · Urban Cabaret II

  
 
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p.1 #1 · Urban Cabaret II


C&C welcome


Feb 06, 2009 at 04:43 PM
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p.1 #2 · Urban Cabaret II


hi,

My comments or suggestions below are not a criticism of you, your model, your talent or skill. I offer them in a friendly tone of voice and with the sole intent to help you with a second POV and set of eyes. If you read sincere questions and simple suggestions as "criticism" of you, then you will miss how I am trying to help you.

Of course this may be your own "style" or your own "vision" and I suppose we can assume that the images look just like they do because that is exactly how you like them. That is OK too. It just shows that there are differences of "opinion" on what looks good. IF these are exactly what you want and like, then by all means continue making your images look like that and have fun doing it. As I always say: "Follow your own muse."


I don't think a "girl holding wall up" pose as shown here does much for the concept of "urban cabaret."

My Simple Suggestion: Next time show the front, show the eyes, show action.

I hope this comment helps you.




Feb 06, 2009 at 05:36 PM
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p.1 #3 · Urban Cabaret II


vibrant color but I do have to agree with steady.


Feb 06, 2009 at 05:58 PM
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p.1 #4 · Urban Cabaret II


Not enough seperation of themes.


Feb 07, 2009 at 01:11 AM
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p.1 #5 · Urban Cabaret II


White line in front of mouth looks like a cigarrette..Bruce


Jul 05, 2009 at 08:51 PM
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p.1 #6 · Urban Cabaret II


Umm, it doesn't do much for me.


Jul 05, 2009 at 10:53 PM





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