Archive 2009 · Alice

Kaden K.
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p.1 #1 · Alice

Your constructive criticism is welcomed.

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Jan 11, 2009 at 10:02 PM

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p.1 #2 · Alice

If you like yellow and blowouts on the shines, then its ok.

Jan 11, 2009 at 11:17 PM

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p.1 #3 · Alice

I would loose the simulated yellow gel, ruins some nice shots. work on bringing out some of the facial and hair highlights and sharpen the eyes.

Jan 12, 2009 at 12:13 AM

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p.1 #4 · Alice

First one ..no gel and repair the highlights (burned out in hand and cheek)
Last entry, maybe should be a vertical, to much black on both sides. I like the blur but the eyes and lips, I think should be sharper and the hand on the left is in focus and maybe should be out like the rest of that area. hard to tell with this small image

Jan 12, 2009 at 03:14 PM

Scott Stoness
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p.1 #5 · Alice

I like the composition and expression and eyes looking in the direction of the open space.

The yellow cast (I know its intended) does not work for me.

Scott

Jan 13, 2009 at 12:15 AM


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