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p.1 #1 · Critique needed

Hello everyone, I posted this in a different category but I thought I might post here too since a lot of my work revolves around weddings.

So, here I go. Tell me what you think I could improve on for 2009 in my wedding photos. I've got a pretty solid schedule lined up but I want this to be the best year yet! (as I'm sure everyone else here does too) Thanks in advance.

www.chrisemeottphotography.com

Jan 06, 2009 at 06:33 AM

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p.1 #2 · Critique needed

plenty of FMers will be glad to help you but i'd suggest two things:

1. make a more specific request or pose a specific question
2. post some images directly into the thread-critiquing all of the shots on your website probably won't happen

hope this gets things started

daniel

Jan 06, 2009 at 06:37 AM

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p.1 #3 · Critique needed

The photos look good and you'll evolve as you gain more experience. The only thing I noticed that needs to fixed is your "about me" page - last paragraph:

Thanks for stopping by my site. If you have any questions please feel free to contact me and I can answer any that you may have. Take careand thanks again.

Looks like it should say:

Thanks for stopping by my site. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me and I can answer any questions that you may have. Take care and thanks again.

Good luck in 2009...

Jan 06, 2009 at 01:45 PM

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p.1 #4 · Critique needed

Is it just me - the site loads for me with I.E. 7 - but not my normal Firefox 3.0.5?

Another thing in the "about me" - you describe photography as a hobby! Not a good word for a professional. Describe it as a passion perhaps.

Jan 06, 2009 at 05:32 PM

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p.1 #5 · Critique needed

I tried it firefox and it still worked, and great point about the wording. Thank you, it's been changed.

Jan 06, 2009 at 05:56 PM

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p.1 #6 · Critique needed

cre55107 wrote:
I tried it firefox and it still worked.

And for me the second time of asking

Jan 06, 2009 at 06:14 PM

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