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p.1 #1 · Budapest

One couple had a wedding there on that day. So there were flower petals leading to the church. It was really pretty. I wonder if this composition works! Thanks.

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Jan 05, 2009 at 04:57 PM

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p.1 #2 · Budapest

Hi.
I think the composition works, with the "path" leading us to the main door...
But, I think the top left corner is disturbing:
I would remove the 2 black "things", then use eventually a tiny black frame (2 or 3 pixels) to close the picture. As per now, the top left is so bright that we don't see where the picture stops and where the frame starts. Same for the top.
Else, great conversion
Alain

Jan 05, 2009 at 05:01 PM

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p.1 #3 · Budapest

gfdal wrote:
Hi.
I think the composition works, with the "path" leading us to the main door...
But, I think the top left corner is disturbing:
I would remove the 2 black "things", then use eventually a tiny black frame (2 or 3 pixels) to close the picture. As per now, the top left is so bright that we don't see where the picture stops and where the frame starts. Same for the top.
Else, great conversion
Alain

Thank you for the good comments, Alain.

Jan 06, 2009 at 12:10 AM

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p.1 #4 · Budapest

This composition works, but for me, it only "works."
I guess I'm too inquisitive, because I want to see the whole structure. For this to "shine" versus just "work," I'm imagining a very low perspective with the path centrally located, starting at the bottom of the shot so that we could see everything.
Mind you, this is just my opinion!

Jan 06, 2009 at 01:35 AM


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