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Bob Jarman
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p.1 #1 · LE Exoeriment

First attempt at long exposures - know it's a ho-hum subject (bridge, that is) but would appreciate suggestions, comments...

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Thanks for looking,

Bob

Dec 30, 2008 at 03:48 AM

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p.1 #2 · LE Exoeriment

#1 and #3 in particular is very stricking Bob.

Dec 30, 2008 at 04:33 AM

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p.1 #3 · LE Exoeriment

Not so-ho hum to those of us who don't have that sort of bridge.

Dec 30, 2008 at 02:30 PM

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p.1 #4 · LE Exoeriment

Thanks Kaden & Paul,

Actually, it is a 'faux-bridge' - built over a flood-proof cement culvert, our residential community's landmark. The original, not nearly as striking or well built, was destroyed in a 100-year-flood-event in 1990 thanks to builders destroying the watershed up stream.

In spring and autumn it is commonly used as a backdrop for senior, informal wedding, and family pictures; in the summer gnats and mosquitoes rule down by the water.

Bob

Dec 30, 2008 at 04:00 PM

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p.1 #5 · LE Exoeriment

Pretty spot, pretty shots, Bob. I like the last best. First is quite nice but I wish there was just a tad more light on the roof, or a slight hint of light along the peak of the roof to really make the image sing.
Second is nice as well, but feels a bit tilted. Prob perspective distorition inevitable from the angle at which the image was photographed.
In the third, the light trails really add another dynamic element to the image.
Enjoy your New Year!

Scott

Dec 31, 2008 at 07:38 PM

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p.1 #6 · LE Exoeriment

Nice pictures.

1 is a bit centred up and down but good.

2 is good but the added detail of exposure detracts for me. I think it would be better a bit darker.

3 is the best for me. With a little less base and a little less right and bit more left it would be better for me.

Tough exposure challenge. Good job. Scott

Jan 02, 2009 at 10:47 PM

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p.1 #7 · LE Exoeriment

Thanks Scott,

And welcome back

Bob

Jan 03, 2009 at 12:27 AM

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