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Bob Jarman
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p.1 #1 · LE Exoeriment


First attempt at long exposures - know it's a ho-hum subject (bridge, that is) but would appreciate suggestions, comments...

#1
http://www.aug.edu/rjarman/Photos/FM_POSTS/Bridge_01.jpg

#2
http://www.aug.edu/rjarman/Photos/FM_POSTS/Bridge_02.jpg

#3
http://www.aug.edu/rjarman/Photos/FM_POSTS/Bridge_03.jpg

Thanks for looking,

Bob





Dec 29, 2008 at 10:48 PM
Kaden K.
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p.1 #2 · LE Exoeriment


#1 and #3 in particular is very stricking Bob.


Dec 29, 2008 at 11:33 PM
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p.1 #3 · LE Exoeriment


Not so-ho hum to those of us who don't have that sort of bridge.


Dec 30, 2008 at 09:30 AM
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #4 · LE Exoeriment


Thanks Kaden & Paul,

Actually, it is a 'faux-bridge' - built over a flood-proof cement culvert, our residential community's landmark. The original, not nearly as striking or well built, was destroyed in a 100-year-flood-event in 1990 thanks to builders destroying the watershed up stream.

In spring and autumn it is commonly used as a backdrop for senior, informal wedding, and family pictures; in the summer gnats and mosquitoes rule down by the water.

Bob



Dec 30, 2008 at 11:00 AM
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p.1 #5 · LE Exoeriment


Pretty spot, pretty shots, Bob. I like the last best. First is quite nice but I wish there was just a tad more light on the roof, or a slight hint of light along the peak of the roof to really make the image sing.
Second is nice as well, but feels a bit tilted. Prob perspective distorition inevitable from the angle at which the image was photographed.
In the third, the light trails really add another dynamic element to the image.
Enjoy your New Year!

Scott



Dec 31, 2008 at 02:38 PM
Scott Stoness
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p.1 #6 · LE Exoeriment


Nice pictures.

1 is a bit centred up and down but good.

2 is good but the added detail of exposure detracts for me. I think it would be better a bit darker.

3 is the best for me. With a little less base and a little less right and bit more left it would be better for me.

Tough exposure challenge. Good job. Scott



Jan 02, 2009 at 05:47 PM
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #7 · LE Exoeriment


Thanks Scott,

And welcome back

Bob



Jan 02, 2009 at 07:27 PM





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