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p.1 #1 · Reindeer in flight - controversial image


Merry Christmas everyone (or happy holidays for those who do not celebrate Christmas)!

This is my first post ever on this forum, so I am not sure if I am posting in the right sub-forum/category.

I would be happy to receive some feedback on this image:


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(reindeer in Swedish Lapland)

My intention was to give a feeling of flight/fast motion and still show some of the surrounding landscape (trees in the background, autumn colours, ...).

I know what I myself think of it, but I experienced some very controversial comments on this image and it seems to be very polarising. Hence I am curious about your comments/critique .

Cheers,
Alex


Edited on Dec 25, 2008 at 03:39 PM · View previous versions


Dec 25, 2008 at 01:47 PM
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p.1 #2 · Reindeer in flight - controversial image


The photo is in the spirit of Christmas. There are a few areas that could be improved. The "snow" came out a little to orangish. And Rudolphs nose could use bumping up the red a bit, as it is hard to see. (bad humor alert)



Seriously, I like it.....but a tiny bit too much blur for me..because a few faces have a bit too much......

Dec 25, 2008 at 02:08 PM
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p.1 #3 · Reindeer in flight - controversial image


Thank you!

If Rudolph's nose got bumped too much, it would certainly get red in the end. But I usually do not mess with my subjects that much

As for the blur, they were all moving in different and changing directions, so you cannot get all the faces sharp in panning. The only way would have been a shorter exposure then (this was 1/15 s). I might try next time I get a chance.

Dec 25, 2008 at 02:21 PM
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p.1 #4 · Reindeer in flight - controversial image


Welcome, Alex.... you are at the right address here:-) I definitely get the feeling of Flight/fast - lovely colors and composition. ..but I think you got too much blurr on the subjects. Nice panning and I agree with you - next time you have to stop down to a smaller aperture

Pls. post that image here again - would love to see it...and Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you, too

Best Bee

Dec 25, 2008 at 07:02 PM
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p.1 #5 · Reindeer in flight - controversial image


Hi Alex,

Nice to see you here!

Nice image too! I like the way it portrays motion. Nice!

It delivers an almost iconic cave-painting portrayal at the same time that it brings it all into the present - realistic and tells a story. I dunno if it was an accident or not but knowing you I'd say not. Either way it's an exceptional image - as per your usual!




Dec 25, 2008 at 09:13 PM
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p.1 #6 · Reindeer in flight - controversial image


Hi Alex,
Welcome to the Forum.
Motion, flight, colors, subject are all excellent. For me, however, there is just too much blur. I'd either like to see more of the reindeer sharper, or more of the landscape sharper. I think the challenge is the panning and shutter speed. Personally, I find the panning very difficult to get right. I suppose you could use a very high shutter speed, light allowing, then work in Photoshop to add some motion blur or blur of the foreground/background.
Scott

Dec 25, 2008 at 09:42 PM
 



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Tanks all for the nice welcome!

beebibi ... next time might be more distant future, since you have to be in the right place at the right time for those reindeer. I spent almost 2 full days out in a tent just for some reindeer images (some very different from this one). Right now they are almost 2000 miles away from my current location

Bifurcator ... hehe, thanks, we know each other from a different realm Great to meet you on this forum The shot was not accidental, but I had to be quick to get my camera up and set aperture and "shutter speed" according to what I wanted when those reindeer started running. So I might not have hit it perfectly.

sbeme (Scott) ... OK, it seems to be as I thought, the image really divides opinions and you are with those saying too much blur. Thanks for your suggestion of doing things in post processing, but this is not my style. I work on contrast, might dodge and burn a bit where it is needed, but I never apply any of that high-tech post processing. Don't get me wrong, but some people draw with a pen, others paint in oil, and others again use water colours Still your thoughts are appreciated

Dec 25, 2008 at 09:59 PM
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p.1 #8 · Reindeer in flight - controversial image


Alex I dig the reindeers on the run. Was Santa Klaus running after them all drunked out of his skull?

Dec 26, 2008 at 03:09 AM
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p.1 #9 · Reindeer in flight - controversial image


I love the colors, unfortunately by having so much motion blur, my eyes are not able to find a place to rest in this image. Looking at this makes me dizzy. I would prefer to have one of several things happen, either have something appear still (ideally for this image that would be the background) or perhaps a very tight crop of some parts suggesting reindeer, which would let the mind work the rest out.

Thanks for posting and happy Boxing Day everyone!!

-- Mark

Dec 26, 2008 at 11:50 AM
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p.1 #10 · Reindeer in flight - controversial image


Thanks all!

sifpandor... with a still background, I would have nothing of the reindeer unblurred. As it is now, two reindeer heads stand out as they are unblurred. At least in large print they stand out. I would not want to give up that.

I might try a crop with only few reindeer, that might address your ideas in a way.

Dec 26, 2008 at 12:34 PM
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p.1 #11 · Reindeer in flight - controversial image


Here come two new crops .. of course not really usable for large print due to the crop:



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This image is copyrighted by the owner






Dec 26, 2008 at 09:09 PM
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p.1 #12 · Reindeer in flight - controversial image


I like the original best but the second of the two new crops is pretty nice too!




Dec 27, 2008 at 03:17 AM
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