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p.1 #1 · mary and david

Ok I thought I would finally try a few from a recent wedding for c&c. Sorry there are so many. There was no dancing, no music. A couple of my photographer friends were 50/50, one like them one rip me. Thanks for your comments, advice.
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Dec 17, 2008 at 04:37 AM

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p.1 #2 · mary and david

I like your wide angle dress shot. Your B&W conversions could use more punchiness and pop.

Dec 17, 2008 at 04:45 AM

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p.1 #3 · mary and david

i like them - but is 12 out of focus?

Dec 17, 2008 at 12:49 PM

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p.1 #4 · mary and david

Hmmm. Mixed bag for me. It's seems like you're on the verge, but just are lacking some consistency.

Some are great (8, 16 (with a different crop), 21), but some have some distinct 'beginner' looks to them with the tilt and direct flash. That's not a slight on you, just my first impressions.

Dec 17, 2008 at 01:02 PM

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p.1 #5 · mary and david

Kinda with Tony.. 24 and 25 are amateur hour due to the direct flash, but the bridal portrait (6) and some of the detail shots are pro quality.

Dec 17, 2008 at 03:24 PM

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p.1 #6 · mary and david

Thanks to all who left comments. Tony no slight taken, this is all a learning process and I learn from the good and the bad. The original 16 isn't out of focus but this image does. Again I appreciate all your comments.
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Stan r

Dec 17, 2008 at 09:23 PM

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p.1 #7 · mary and david

12 is oof

Dec 17, 2008 at 09:35 PM

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p.1 #8 · mary and david

Some help on the BW conversions would do a ton, bro.

Dec 18, 2008 at 02:57 PM


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