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Hello,
My comments or suggestions below are not a criticism of you, your model, your talent or skill. I offer them in a friendly tone of voice and with the sole intent to help you with a second POV and set of eyes. If you read sincere questions and simple suggestions as "criticism" of you, then you will miss how I am trying to help you. 
My Comment: It seems so "natural" when viewing a nice photo of a place (building or landscape) to want to know the location. Where is it? What city, state, country?
My Simple Suggestion: provide the viewer with at least a basic caption that describes the location enough to understand where is the scene. Beyond that, tell us (the viewer) something about the place (or building or bridge etc.) that identifies its importance to a city, place, people, nation, time. You may be showing someone something they will never see in person. Share the significance of the place with your viewer/audience.
My next suggestion is based on a POV or opinion that is not commonly expressed. In fact, it goes "counter" to how many people use/make/show/share/critique photography. So, I admit this suggestion is "unconventional." But, I believe if you follow this suggestion, you and many others will enjoy your photographs more richly and deeply. I don't wish to "debate" this suggestion here in your thread, but I will offer it as a suggestion because I truly believe it is something that would be beneficial to many (you and others).
Steady's Suggestion: Share how the place made you feel. Give us a sense of the place that goes beyond visual. Tell us something about the sight, sound, texture, smells, and atmosphere of the place we see. 
I like this photo. It is very nice and looks very good in BW. I like the composition, the light, and the BW use. 
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