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p.1 #1 · My coworker Frank

My coworker Franky asked me if I could do a portrait of him. We both love B&W photography...comments always welcome...

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Dec 14, 2008 at 09:47 PM

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p.1 #2 · My coworker Frank

I'm no portrait specialist, Stefan, so take this with that in mind.

On the positive side, you've captured a very nice, relaxed position and expression. You've also got the eyes just right.

Distractions for me: too bright on the lit side and too dark on the non-lit side. His shoulder disappears with the background. Also, the watch is pretty huge and maybe should be removed next time. Lastly, his right hand comes up with only the fingers showing. Should maybe show some wrist, or otherwise this gives the illusion of someone else reaching up.

Despite my picks at this (in order to help!), I think it has a nice feel, and I have to believe he's happy with it.

Dec 14, 2008 at 10:37 PM

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p.1 #3 · My coworker Frank

Hi T-Bone1,

thanks for replying. Franky wanted the shot this way with one light-source. I showed him a similar shot I did of someone else and he wanted it too. Franky is a big 'watch-man' so that's the reason for the big watch being there. I did not pay much attention to the other hand and feel you are right!

Thanks for the comments again!

Dec 14, 2008 at 10:43 PM

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p.1 #4 · My coworker Frank

I like the light and the expression and BW.

The watch is a BIG distraction from the face.

When so little is seen in an image frame, those elements that are seen do take on importance. Watches may be important to him...but here it looks like it is "as important" as his face.

Dec 15, 2008 at 12:56 AM

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p.1 #5 · My coworker Frank

Here we have a portrait which is different in a provocative way -

A very direct approach...sparsely lit but very clear as to what Franky is all about - it projects an image of an intelligent, confident, friendly and handsome nice guy who likes big watches!.

Stephan, I believe you have accomplished what you set out to do - no wonder Franky is pleased with you.

Best, Bee

Dec 15, 2008 at 05:43 AM

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p.1 #6 · My coworker Frank

Hi beebibi, hi Steadyhand,

This is what I love about FM, good comments to improve the overall quality and enough positive words to keep you going :-)

Steadyhand, looking at the picture again I think the way to 'solve' the watch-issue is to have Franky's sleeve cover part of the watch...what do you think?

Stefan

Dec 15, 2008 at 11:09 AM

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