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p.1 #1 · Bread of Life

Not what I was going for but it was kind of a happy accident. Thoughts?

Dec 11, 2008 at 06:33 AM

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p.1 #2 · Bread of Life

I like the toning and light on the walls. Also like the way it "V's" into the picture. The composition is pleasing as well. My nit would be that the shadows are too dark for my taste. I'd like at least some detail on the figure and building.

Dec 11, 2008 at 07:20 AM

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p.1 #3 · Bread of Life

Too dark for me (the shadows are solid blacks as solid areas).

"Lighten up."

Dec 11, 2008 at 02:14 PM

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p.1 #4 · Bread of Life

Another great comp comment, but also another shadow critique. I think the high contrast is a good idea, but IMHO something this contrasty needs a much simpler composition.

Dec 11, 2008 at 05:12 PM

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p.1 #5 · Bread of Life

I echo T-bone 1's comments.

Scott

Dec 11, 2008 at 05:51 PM

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p.1 #6 · Bread of Life

2nd try. Toned things down a bit.

Dec 12, 2008 at 05:10 AM

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p.1 #7 · Bread of Life

The new version is much better. It's a very moody shot.

Dec 12, 2008 at 05:52 PM

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p.1 #8 · Bread of Life

Much improved, but none of the mood is lost.

Dec 12, 2008 at 06:37 PM

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p.1 #9 · Bread of Life

Thanks guys for the comments. It really helps me.

Dec 18, 2008 at 02:51 PM

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