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Archive 2008 · Horse Barn

  
 
T-bone1
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p.1 #1 · Horse Barn


First real attempt at an old-time look. I really like the color, toning, and texture, but wonder if there's too much detail lost.
Your thoughts?
Thanks! - Tim

http://fc63.deviantart.com/fs38/i/2008/336/3/c/Horse_Barn_by_1cixelsyd.jpg



Dec 01, 2008 at 10:52 PM
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p.1 #2 · Horse Barn


The tone is well suited to the image but the vignette and texture need to be dialed way down, you might even try another texture that isn't so repetitive .


Dec 01, 2008 at 11:38 PM
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p.1 #3 · Horse Barn


Sorry Tim this doesnt do it for me. Way too much texture that I can't really even make out the image. The OOF vignette is very strange to me too. I usually prefer a black vignette. Keep trying!

eric



Dec 02, 2008 at 10:13 PM
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p.1 #4 · Horse Barn


I agree that black might work better for the vignettes, but I think this is a good start. Maybe the opacity of the grain might be reduced some too. The sepia tone is good.

J.R.



Dec 02, 2008 at 10:24 PM
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p.1 #5 · Horse Barn


Hey, thanks all for the feedback. Yup, I wondered if it might be a bit much. Back to the drawing board on this!


Dec 02, 2008 at 10:46 PM
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p.1 #6 · Horse Barn


I agree with Tim, just a bit less texture would have worked better.


Dec 03, 2008 at 06:52 AM





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